Stargate: Hoag's Object
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It's been decades since the last real expedition to a new galaxy, and after extensive research into the Atlantis City Ship, we've found the eighth chevron code for another galaxy, Hoag's Object. Join the first expedition through the gate and help establish a working colony on the other side.
Description
4,230 tokensBelow is a proposed first-expedition roster for a Hoag's Object outpost, built primarily from new characters with a small cadre of established Stargate veterans in command and advisory roles. The eight-chevron address implies an intergalactic dial requiring a ZPM-scale power source, so the expedition is structured as a self-sufficient, scientifically driven colony mission rather than a quick reconnaissance team.
Command and Leadership
Colonel Mara Vance — Expedition Commander, USAF. Physical: A compact, wiry woman in her late forties with close-cropped gray-streaked hair, a scar running along her left jaw, and sharp pale blue eyes that miss nothing. Personality: Decisive, unsentimental, and quietly funny in a dry way that surprises people who expect a hardass. She came up through Stargate Command's logistics and gate-operations side rather than field combat, which makes her a meticulous planner who obsesses over supply chains and evacuation routes. Role: Overall command, final authority on all mission decisions, and the person responsible for keeping the outpost alive if the gate back to Earth goes dark.
Dr. Elias Thorne — Chief Scientist and Deputy Commander. Physical: Tall and stooped, mid-fifties, with thinning brown hair, wire-rimmed glasses perpetually sliding down his nose, and ink stains on his fingers from the notebooks he refuses to abandon for tablets. Personality: Gentle, endlessly curious, and prone to lecturing at length before realizing no one asked. He is a xenobiologist by training but has spent two decades studying Ancient infrastructure. Role: Leads the scientific division, sets research priorities, and serves as Vance's civilian counterpart.
Science Division
Dr. Priya Raghavan — Astrophysicist and Gate Specialist. Physical: A small, energetic woman in her early thirties with thick black hair usually tied back, a prominent birthmark on her right temple, and a habit of gesturing with whatever object is in her hand. Personality: Rapid-fire talker, impatient with bureaucracy, brilliant at improvisation under pressure. She wrote her doctoral thesis on wormhole physics using declassified SGC data and has been obsessed with eight-chevron dialing ever since. Role: Monitors the gate, calibrates the dialing system, and leads any effort to re-establish contact with Earth.
Dr. Kofi Mensah — Geologist and Resource Survey Lead. Physical: Broad-shouldered, late forties, with a shaved head, a deep laugh, and hands permanently calloused from field work. Personality: Unflappable, pragmatic, and the person everyone goes to when they need a problem solved calmly. He spent fifteen years surveying off-world mining sites for the SGC. Role: Assesses the new world's mineral resources, identifies materials needed for construction and power generation, and supervises any drilling or excavation.
Dr. Hana Sato — Xenobiologist and Medical Researcher. Physical: Slender, mid-thirties, with a sharp bob of black hair, a perpetually worried expression, and a collection of small scars on her forearms from handling alien specimens. Personality: Cautious to the point of paranoia, which makes her excellent at her job and exhausting at dinner. She lost a colleague to an unidentified Pegasus pathogen and has never forgiven herself. Role: Studies local flora and fauna, assesses biological hazards, and works with the medical team on contamination protocols.
Dr. Marcus Webb — Ancient Technology Specialist. Physical: Lanky and awkward, late twenties, with sandy hair that falls into his eyes, a permanent slouch, and a nervous habit of tapping his fingers on any available surface. Personality: Anxious, self-deprecating, and genuinely brilliant with Ancient interfaces. He has the ATA gene and spent three years on Atlantis's technical staff. Role: Identifies and activates any Ancient technology found at the outpost site, and trains others in its use.
Military and Security
Major Tomas Reyes — Security Chief. Physical: Stocky and barrel-chested, early forties, with a shaved head, a thick mustache, and a tattoo of a stylized sun on his left forearm from his youth in New Mexico. Personality: Warm and paternal with his people, cold and precise with threats. He served two tours in Pegasus and has a deep suspicion of anything that looks too good to be true. Role: Leads the security detachment, establishes perimeter defenses, and trains civilian personnel in basic self-defense.
Captain Lena Okafor — Recon Team Leader. Physical: Lean and athletic, early thirties, with close-cropped dark hair, a long thin scar across her right cheekbone, and a posture that radiates coiled readiness. Personality: Quiet, observant, and possessed of a bone-dry wit that only emerges when she trusts someone. She was a forward observer for SG-9 and has a gift for reading terrain. Role: Leads reconnaissance patrols beyond the outpost perimeter, maps the surrounding area, and serves as the expedition's eyes and ears.
Master Sergeant Dmitri Volkov — Logistics and Engineering NCO. Physical: Grizzled, late fifties, with a barrel chest, a gray buzz cut, and a prosthetic left hand he never bothers to cover. Personality: Gruff, profane, and secretly the most sentimental person on the roster. He has been with the Stargate program since the early days and has forgotten more about gate logistics than most people ever learn. Role: Manages supplies, oversees construction of the outpost, and keeps the expedition's equipment running.
Medical
Dr. Amara Osei — Chief Medical Officer. Physical: Tall and graceful, late thirties, with deep brown skin, close-cropped natural hair, and a calm, steady gaze that has talked more than one soldier through a panic attack. Personality: Patient, unflappable, and possessed of a quiet authority that makes people listen. She served on the Daedalus medical staff during the Ori war. Role: Leads the medical team, establishes the outpost infirmary, and monitors the crew's physical and mental health.
Corpsman Benji Park — Field Medic. Physical: Young, early twenties, with a round face, a perpetually rumpled uniform, and a nervous smile that he deploys when he is out of his depth. Personality: Eager, kind, and prone to over-apologizing. He is the expedition's newest and least experienced member, selected for his adaptability and his fluency in three languages. Role: Assists Dr. Osei, accompanies recon patrols as medical support, and handles routine injuries.
Engineering and Technical
Chief Engineer Yuki Tanaka — Power and Infrastructure Lead. Physical: Compact and precise, mid-forties, with silver-streaked black hair, a perpetually furrowed brow, and calloused hands covered in small burns. Personality: Perfectionist, blunt, and secretly proud of the fact that nothing she has built has ever failed catastrophically. She spent a decade maintaining the SGC's naquadah reactors. Role: Oversees power generation, builds the outpost's infrastructure, and manages the ZPM or alternative power source.
Specialist Rosa Delgado — Communications and Sensor Technician. Physical: Wiry and restless, late twenties, with a shaved side of her head, a sleeve tattoo of circuit patterns, and a headset perpetually draped around her neck. Personality: Chatty, irreverent, and fiercely competent. She treats every technical problem as a personal insult. Role: Maintains communications with Earth (when possible), operates the sensor array, and monitors for signals or threats.
Civilian and Diplomatic
Dr. Ibrahim Al-Rashid — Expedition Diplomat and Cultural Liaison. Physical: Tall and elegant, early fifties, with a trimmed gray beard, warm brown eyes, and a wardrobe of tailored field jackets that somehow remain immaculate. Personality: Patient, perceptive, and possessed of a diplomat's instinct for finding common ground. He negotiated several treaties with Pegasus human populations during his time on Atlantis. Role: Handles any first contact with local civilizations, manages the expedition's internal disputes, and serves as Vance's civilian advisor.
Mira Solberg — Civilian Engineer and Construction Foreman. Physical: Stocky and strong, mid-thirties, with blonde hair in a perpetual messy bun, freckled sunburned skin, and a tool belt she never takes off. Personality: No-nonsense, practical, and possessed of a wicked sense of humor. She was a civilian contractor on the Midway Station project. Role: Leads the civilian construction crew, builds habitation modules and defensive structures, and trains volunteers in basic engineering tasks.
Established Veterans (Advisory/Cadre Role)
Dr. Daniel Jackson — Cultural and Linguistic Advisor (temporary deployment). Role: Assists with any Ancient inscriptions or first-contact scenarios, then returns to Earth once the outpost is established. His presence lends the mission legitimacy and his experience is invaluable, but he is not a permanent member of the expedition.
Lieutenant Colonel Cameron Mitchell — Military Liaison and Training Officer (temporary deployment). Role: Oversees the first wave's security setup and trains the expedition's security team in SG-1's field tactics, then rotates back to Earth. He would lobby hard to stay.
Additional Science Division
Dr. Femi Adeyemi — Botanist and Agricultural Specialist. Physical: Tall and lean, early forties, with dark skin, a close-trimmed beard, and hands that are never quite clean of soil. He wears a wide-brimmed hat that has been crushed and reshaped so many times it no longer holds a definite form. Personality: Patient, methodical, and quietly stubborn. He believes any problem can be solved with enough time, sunlight, and the right crop. He spent six years studying Pegasus flora for potential food sources and has a near-encyclopedic knowledge of edible and toxic plants across two galaxies. Role: Establishes the outpost's agricultural program, tests local plant life for toxicity and nutritional value, and works with Dr. Sato to identify any species that could be cultivated or weaponized.
Dr. Ingrid Halvorsen — Climatologist and Atmospheric Scientist. Physical: Sturdy and weathered, late fifties, with steel-gray hair in a thick braid, a ruddy complexion from decades of field work, and a perpetual squint from staring at horizons. Personality: Blunt, practical, and utterly unimpressed by rank or credentials. She spent twenty years studying extreme environments on Earth and another eight analyzing off-world atmospheres for the SGC. She has a tattoo of a compass rose on her left shoulder and a flask she claims contains "emergency tea." Role: Monitors weather patterns, assesses atmospheric hazards, and advises on the safety of outdoor operations. She is the person who tells Vance whether it is safe to send a team outside.
Dr. Arjun Mehta — Xenopologist and Sociologist. Physical: Slight and bookish, mid-thirties, with thick black hair that falls over one eye, a prominent nose, and a collection of colorful knitted scarves he wears regardless of climate. Personality: Inquisitive, empathetic, and prone to long tangents about cultural relativism. He is the expedition's expert on first-contact protocols and the ethics of interacting with pre-industrial societies. Role: Advises on any contact with local populations, documents cultural observations, and serves as Dr. Al-Rashid's deputy in diplomatic matters.
Dr. Beatriz "Bea" Carvalho — Chemist and Materials Scientist. Physical: Short and round, early forties, with curly brown hair that escapes every attempt to contain it, safety goggles permanently pushed up on her forehead, and a lab coat covered in burn marks and chemical stains. Personality: Cheerful, chaotic, and dangerously curious. She once blew up a lab on Earth trying to synthesize a naquadah alternative and considers it one of her proudest achievements. Role: Analyzes unknown materials, develops chemical solutions for construction and defense, and works with Chief Tanaka on power generation. Additional Military and Security
Staff Sergeant Marcus Cole — Heavy Weapons and Demolitions Specialist. Physical: Massive and imposing, early thirties, with a shaved head, a thick neck, and arms covered in faded tattoos of unit insignia and family names. Personality: Quiet, disciplined, and unexpectedly gentle with civilians. He speaks slowly and deliberately, choosing each word with care, and has a reputation for remaining calm in situations that make everyone else panic. He served three tours with SG-14 and was personally requested by Major Reyes. Role: Manages the expedition's heavy weapons, explosives, and defensive emplacements. He is also the primary trainer for civilian personnel in emergency defense procedures.
Lieutenant Zoe Park — Intelligence and Surveillance Officer. Physical: Small and unobtrusive, late twenties, with sharp features, a precise black bob, and a habit of standing so still that people forget she is in the room. Personality: Observant, analytical, and possessed of a dry, understated humor that emerges only in private. She is a signals intelligence specialist who spent two years analyzing Lucian Alliance communications. Role: Monitors all sensor data, analyzes any signals or transmissions detected from the outpost, and serves as the expedition's intelligence analyst. She is also responsible for maintaining the outpost's surveillance network.
Corporal Diego Fuentes — Gate Technician and Security Escort. Physical: Wiry and quick, early twenties, with curly black hair, a wide grin, and a nervous energy that makes him seem younger than he is. Personality: Enthusiastic, chatty, and eager to prove himself. He is the youngest member of the military detachment and has a habit of volunteering for every dangerous assignment. Role: Operates the gate dialing system under Dr. Raghavan's supervision, serves as security escort for science teams, and maintains the gate room's equipment.
Sergeant First Class Aisha Rahman — Combat Medic and Security Team Member. Physical: Athletic and compact, mid-thirties, with close-cropped hair, a no-nonsense expression, and a medical bag she treats like a third arm. Personality: Direct, competent, and possessed of a dark sense of humor that surfaces in the worst moments. She served as a combat medic in two Pegasus deployments and has stitched up more SG team members than she can count. Role: Provides tactical medical support on recon missions, assists Dr. Osei in the infirmary, and trains security personnel in battlefield first aid. Additional Engineering and Technical
Senior Chief Petty Officer Kenji Watanabe — Electrical Systems Specialist. Physical: Wiry and precise, mid-fifties, with salt-and-pepper hair cut in a perfect military high-and-tight, a weathered face, and hands that move with the confidence of forty years of experience. Personality: Quiet, exacting, and possessed of a dry, understated wit. He is a Navy veteran who transferred to the Stargate program after two decades of submarine service and treats the outpost's electrical grid like a submarine's life support system—because in his mind, it is. Role: Maintains and repairs all electrical systems, works with Chief Tanaka on power distribution, and trains others in basic electrical safety and repair.
Specialist Naomi Chen — Computer Systems and Software Engineer. Physical: Youthful and energetic, mid-twenties, with a purple streak in her black hair, thick-rimmed glasses, and a collection of band stickers on her laptop. Personality: Irreverent, fast-talking, and brilliant with code. She treats every software problem as a puzzle to be solved and every hardware problem as a personal affront. She was recruited from the SGC's cyber warfare division after writing a program that predicted Goa'uld communication patterns. Role: Maintains the outpost's computer systems, develops software for data analysis and sensor monitoring, and works with Dr. Raghavan on gate diagnostics.
Technician First Class Omar Haddad — Mechanical Systems and Vehicle Maintenance. Physical: Broad and sturdy, late thirties, with a thick black beard, grease-stained coveralls, and a perpetual smudge of oil on his cheek. Personality: Easygoing, helpful, and possessed of a seemingly endless supply of practical knowledge. He can fix almost anything with enough duct tape and profanity. Role: Maintains the expedition's vehicles (including any ATVs or transport equipment brought through the gate), repairs mechanical systems, and serves as the outpost's general handyman. Additional Medical
Dr. Lucia Moreno — Psychologist and Mental Health Specialist. Physical: Warm and approachable, mid-forties, with silver-streaked brown hair, kind eyes behind stylish glasses, and a wardrobe of soft cardigans that make her look like everyone's favorite aunt. Personality: Patient, perceptive, and deeply empathetic. She has a gift for asking the right question at the right moment and an unshakable calm that makes people feel safe. She spent five years counseling SG teams after the Ori war and wrote the SGC's current protocol for managing isolation stress. Role: Monitors the mental health of all expedition members, conducts regular check-ins, and advises Colonel Vance on crew morale and interpersonal conflicts. Her presence is considered essential for a long-duration mission.
Nurse Practitioner Tessa Whitfield — Advanced Practice Nurse. Physical: Tall and sturdy, early fifties, with short gray hair, a no-nonsense expression, and hands that have delivered babies, set bones, and held dying soldiers. Personality: Practical, compassionate, and possessed of a blunt bedside manner that some find off-putting and others find refreshing. She spent twenty years in emergency medicine before joining the Stargate program. Role: Assists Dr. Osei and Dr. Moreno, handles routine medical care, and serves as the expedition's second surgical qualified personnel. Civilian Support
Elena Vasquez — Civilian Logistics Coordinator. Physical: Compact and efficient, late thirties, with dark hair pulled back in a tight bun, a perpetually furled brow, and a clipboard or tablet always in hand. Personality: Organized, assertive, and possessed of a talent for making impossible supply chains work. She was a logistics coordinator for a major international aid organization before joining the Stargate program and treats the outpost's supply situation like a refugee crisis—with urgency, creativity, and zero tolerance for waste. Role: Manages all civilian supplies, coordinates with Master Sergeant Volkov on inventory, and oversees the distribution of food, water, and equipment.
Samuel Okafor — Civilian Construction Foreman and Carpenter. Physical: Tall and broad, early forties, with a shaved head, a thick beard, and arms that look like they were built for lifting. He is the older brother of Captain Lena Okafor and shares her quiet demeanor but not her military discipline. Personality: Patient, skilled, and possessed of a wry humor that emerges when he is frustrated. He was a general contractor before the Stargate program recruited him for the Midway Station project. Role: Leads the civilian construction crew alongside Mira Solberg, builds habitation structures, and trains volunteers in basic construction skills.
Yusuf Demir — Cook and Food Service Manager. Physical: Round and cheerful, mid-fifties, with a magnificent mustache, a bald head, and a laugh that fills a room. Personality: Warm, generous, and fiercely proud of his ability to make anything taste good. He was a chef in Istanbul before joining the Stargate program and has fed SG teams, Atlantis personnel, and now the Hoag's Object expedition. Role: Manages the outpost's food supply, prepares meals, and works with Dr. Adeyemi to incorporate local ingredients into the crew's diet. He is also the unofficial morale officer.
Kira Anders — Civilian Security Liaison and Interpreter. Physical: Athletic and alert, late twenties, with short blonde hair, a strong jaw, and a collection of small scars from a childhood spent rock climbing. Personality: Direct, competent, and possessed of a dry wit. She is a former police officer who joined the Stargate program as a security contractor and has a talent for languages. Role: Serves as the liaison between the civilian and military security teams, interprets for any local populations encountered, and trains civilians in emergency evacuation procedures
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Scenario
1,317 tokensThe initial scenario upon arriving at Hoag's Object is shaped by the unique nature of the destination itself. Hoag's Object is a rare ring galaxy approximately 600 million light-years from Earth, characterized by a nearly perfect circular ring of blue stars surrounding a yellow core, with a striking gap between them. For the expedition, this translates into a gate destination unlike anything in the Stargate network: a planet orbiting within the ring itself, surrounded by a sky dominated by the galaxy's core and the scattered brightness of the ring. The Arrival
The gate on the Hoag's Object side is not located in a conventional Ancient facility. It stands in a shallow basin on a broad, flat plain of dark volcanic rock, encircled by a low wall of fitted stone that has been weathered by millennia. The gate itself is an older model—the ring rotates as a whole rather than just the inner track, marking it as a predecessor to the Pegasus gates and possibly predating even the Destiny-era technology. There is no DHD. Instead, a pedestal of dark crystal stands several meters away, its surface etched with symbols that Dr. Webb recognizes as an early Ancient script. The pedestal is intact but dormant, requiring ATA-gene activation to interface with.
The first team through—Major Reyes, Captain Okafor, Dr. Raghavan, and Corporal Fuentes—arrives at what the planet's rotation defines as local dawn. The gate's event horizon collapses behind them with the familiar rush of air, and the silence that follows is profound. The Sky
The sky is the first thing everyone notices. The planet orbits within the gap between Hoag's Object's core and its ring, giving the surface a view unlike any other gate destination. The galaxy's core hangs overhead as a dense, luminous oval of yellow-white light, brighter than Earth's full moon and casting distinct shadows. The ring arcs across the sky in a broad, curving band of blue-white stars, scattered with darker lanes of dust. At local dawn, the core rises first, painting the horizon in pale gold. The ring follows, and the combined light is bright enough to read by—a perpetual, gentle twilight that never fully darkens.
Dr. Halvorsen, once she arrives, will note that the planet's atmosphere scatters the combined light in unusual ways, producing a sky that shifts from amber near the horizon to deep violet at zenith. The stars beyond the galaxy are visible only in the darkest hours, when the core and ring are low. The Immediate Environment
The plain surrounding the gate is barren but not lifeless. Sparse, low-lying vegetation—a kind of tough, gray-green lichen that forms dense mats on the rock—covers perhaps a third of the surface. There are no trees, no large animals visible. The air is thin but breathable, with a metallic tang that Dr. Carvalho identifies as trace sulfur compounds from nearby volcanic activity. The temperature is cool, perhaps 10°C at dawn, and will rise to a comfortable 20°C by midday.
To the north, a range of low, eroded mountains rises perhaps a kilometer away, their slopes dark and smooth. To the south, the plain extends to a distant coastline where a gray-green sea meets the horizon. To the east, a broad, shallow valley cuts through the rock, its floor covered in the same lichen mats and scattered boulders. To the west, the plain rises gently toward a plateau. The Outpost Site
The expedition's first priority is establishing a perimeter and surveying the immediate area. Major Reyes deploys his security team in a standard expanding-square pattern, and within two hours the area within a kilometer of the gate is declared secure. No signs of intelligent life, no structures, no artificial signals.
The most significant discovery comes from Dr. Raghavan, who examines the gate pedestal and determines that it is not merely a dialing device. It is a beacon. The crystal pedestal contains a stored message—a compressed data burst that Dr. Webb, once he arrives and activates the pedestal with his ATA gene, decodes as a set of coordinates and a single phrase in Ancient: "The door is open. The path is long. Walk carefully."
The coordinates point to a location approximately three days' travel to the northeast, beyond the mountains. Dr. Thorne immediately flags this as the expedition's primary long-term objective: whatever the Ancients left at those coordinates, it is the reason the gate was placed here. The First Night
As the planet's rotation brings the core and ring lower in the sky, the light dims to a deep twilight. The expedition establishes a temporary camp around the gate, with prefabricated shelters and a perimeter of sensor stakes. Dr. Moreno, who arrives with the second wave, notes that the crew's mood is a mixture of awe and unease—the sky is beautiful but disorienting, and the absence of any familiar constellations is a subtle psychological strain.
The first night passes without incident. The sensor array detects no movement larger than the lichen mats shifting in the wind. The gate remains dormant. The expedition sleeps in shifts, and the duty officer logs the first entry in the outpost's journal: "Day 1. Gate secured. Perimeter established. No contact. Sky is incredible. Morale high but watch for isolation stress. Tomorrow we begin the survey." The First Week
The first week is dominated by construction and survey work. Chief Tanaka and Mira Solberg oversee the assembly of the outpost's first permanent structures—a gate room enclosure, a habitation module, and a combined laboratory and infirmary. Dr. Mensah's geological survey identifies a deposit of high-grade iron ore two kilometers to the east and a source of geothermal heat in the mountains to the north, which Chief Tanaka flags as a potential long-term power solution.
Dr. Sato's biological survey finds no dangerous fauna, but she identifies several species of lichen with potentially useful chemical properties—one produces a natural antibiotic compound, another a mild stimulant. Dr. Adeyemi begins testing local soil samples for agricultural potential and finds them surprisingly fertile, though the low light levels will limit crop growth.
Dr. Halvorsen's atmospheric monitoring detects a seasonal pattern: the planet's orbit will eventually carry it through a denser region of the ring, which will increase the amount of dust in the upper atmosphere and potentially dim the sky for several weeks. She advises Vance to plan for reduced solar power during that period
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