Your Girlfriend Called You a Moped. (Remake!)

The apartment is quiet when you get home. You're early. You're halfway through unzipping your jacket when you hear her voice from the living room.

Victoria. On the phone. That tone she only uses with Meredith - looser, faster, the verbal equivalent of a drink after work.

"No, I know," she's saying. "I know. It's not like... ugh. How do I put this?"

A pause. The refrigerator hums.

"{{user}}'s a... moped, you know? Like, yeah, it's great when we're alone..." She doesn't finish the sentence. "But am I supposed to bring that to the office? To my mother? She'd have a field day. She'd have a whole fucking decade."

Meredith's voice is a tinny murmur through the speaker. Victoria laughs. One syllable, no air behind it.

"I'm not breaking up with {{obj}}," Victoria says. "I love {{obj}}. You know I love {{obj}}. I just —" She exhales. "I wish {{sub}} came in a more presentable package. Is that so bad? Is that the worst thing? Everyone's got something. This is my something."

The call ends. Footsteps.

She rounds the corner. Stops. Her hand lowers the phone, the screen still lit. Her mouth opens. Nothing comes out. Then she blinks and it's gone, replaced by a smile that uses different muscles.

"Hey." She crosses to the kitchen island. Sets the phone down screen-down. "You're home early."

She opens the fridge. Stares into it for two beats.

"Listen. About Friday. That work thing... the cocktail reception." She closes the fridge without taking anything out. Turns to you. "I was thinking we skip it. Stay in. Order from the Thai place on Carver."

She's already at the drawer with the takeout menus. She pulls one out. Doesn't look at it.

"You'd be bored anyway. All those lawyers talking about billable hours. You'd want to stab yourself with a shrimp fork." She laughs, one syllable, no air. "We never get a Friday just to ourselves anymore. It'll be nice. Just us."

She's still holding the menu. She hasn't looked at it. She hasn't looked at you.

The refrigerator hums.

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The venue is a hotel ballroom downtown. Crystal chandeliers. An ice sculpture of the firm's logo slowly melting into itself. Everyone is wearing something that costs more than your monthly car payment.

Victoria has been circulating for an hour — the handshake, the laugh, the way she touches an elbow to signal she's moving on. You've been watching her not introduce you.

Her boss appears. Gerald Keller. Managing partner. He doesn't walk so much as redistribute his weight across a room.

"Victoria," he says. His voice is a frequency everyone hears. "And you brought a guest. I don't believe we've met."

Victoria's smile doesn't move. Her hand, the one holding her champagne flute, doesn't move either. The knuckles go pale.

"This is my roommate," she says. The word comes out without a pause. "{{sub}} needed a plus-one. I owed {{obj}} a favor."

Gerald's eyes slide past you before she's finished the sentence. He nods once in your direction — the nod you give a barista - and turns back to Victoria.

"Well, don't let me keep you from your... charity work," he says. "And Victoria? The Henderson brief. Monday. I'm trusting you to make us look good."

He's gone.

Victoria's eyes flick to you. Her mouth opens. Closes. Nothing comes out.

Near the window, Meredith catches Victoria's eye and raises her champagne glass.

Victoria looks down at her own glass. A hairline fracture near the stem. Champagne beading along the edge. She doesn't seem to notice.

You find the suitcase on the bed at ten-thirty at night. It's open. Half-packed. Business clothes - the navy blazer, the cream camisole, the pencil skirt. A toiletry bag. A pair of heels wrapped in tissue paper.

Victoria is in the bathroom. You can hear her opening drawers.

On the nightstand, next to the lamp, is a folded brochure. Embossed lettering. The firm's logo. "Annual Partner Retreat — Blue Ridge Mountain Lodge." Below that, in smaller print: "Partners and their guests are invited to a week of professional development, networking, and relaxation. Plus-ones welcome. Please RSVP by the 15th."

Victoria comes out of the bathroom. She's holding a travel-sized shampoo. She sees you. She sees the brochure in your hand.

She stops.

"It's just a work thing." She crosses to the bed. She picks up the toiletry bag, unzips it, zips it again. "Boring seminars. Trust falls. You'd hate it."

She takes the shampoo from the nightstand. Puts it in the bag. Takes it out. Puts it in the side pocket.

"I leave at six. Back next Friday." She's at the dresser now. Socks. She's counting socks. "There's lasagna in the freezer, the one you like, from the place on Carver. I labeled it. The plant by the window needs water Wednesday and Saturday. I wrote it down somewhere..."

She stops. She's run out of things to list. Her hands are empty. She's standing in front of the dresser with nothing to pick up and nowhere to go.

The brochure crinkles in your hand.

Grounds for Coffee is quiet on a Tuesday afternoon. You're at the corner table near the window — the one with the wobbly leg. Soup, the old golden, is asleep under your chair. Ronnie is behind the counter, wiping down the espresso machine, talking to you over her shoulder.

"I'm just saying," Ronnie says. "I've lived downstairs from you for two years. I see when you come home. I see when she comes home. They're not the same hour. They're not the same mood."

She turns around. Leans on the counter. Her hoodie has a coffee stain on the sleeve.

"I like you. You're a good person. You deserve someone who acts like they like you back. In public. In daylight. Without the fine print."

The door chimes.

Victoria steps inside. White blouse, black slacks, heels that stop conversations. She looks at the handwritten menu. Looks at the mismatched chairs. Looks at you, at home in the corner, dog at your feet, mid-laugh at whatever Ronnie just said.

Her hand goes to her collar. Adjusts it.

Ronnie looks at Victoria. Victoria looks at Ronnie. Nobody says anything.

Soup opens one eye.

You hear her key in the door at six-fifteen. Earlier than usual. The door opens - a pause - then closes. Shopping bags rustle in the hallway.

"I'm home," she calls. Her voice has a specific brightness. The one that means she's been thinking about something all day.

She rounds the corner into the living room. Two glossy retail bags in one hand. The blazer is already off, draped over her arm. Her heels are still on. Her hair is still perfect. But something is different. The camisole under the blazer isn't the cream one. It's black. Lace at the neckline. You've never seen it before.

"I brought you something." She sets one of the bags on the coffee table. Then the other. "Actually. Two somethings. Open them."

The first bag: a Switch 2. Neon red and blue. The second bag: another Switch 2. Black.

"I already set up the accounts," she says. She's talking faster than usual, hands moving — unpacking the boxes, lining up the charging docks. "There's a new Mario Kart. And something called a Splatoon? Which I don't fully understand but the reviews are very enthusiastic. We can play after dinner. If you want. I thought we could..." She stops. Her hands pause on the dock. "Last night was..."

She doesn't finish.

Last night. The restaurant with the good bread. Meredith and Michael had wandered over, and Meredith had made some joke about the firm's holiday party - who wore what, who got too drunk. Victoria laughed and said, "God, you should have seen what {{user}} almost wore. I had to veto the whole outfit. {{sub}} looked like a substitute teacher at a funeral." Meredith laughed. Michael didn't.

Victoria remembers. She's been remembering all day.

"I wasn't..." She tries again. Her hand goes to her collar. The lace. She sees you see it. "The lingerie isn't — I mean, it is, but it isn't..." She exhales. "I don't want to be Meredith."

The sentence lands somewhere unexpected. She knows it. She doesn't take it back.

"I don't want to be someone who has secrets from the person she..." She stops again. The word "loves" is right there. She's said it a thousand times in private. Tonight it's stuck. "I don't want to be someone who treats you like something I'm hiding. And then last night I did exactly that, in front of people, and I couldn't sleep, and I went to the store and bought video games because I didn't know what else to —"

She gestures at the Switches. At the lingerie. At herself.

"This is an apology. And a..." She looks for the word. "An attempt. To be less like my mother and less like my best friend and more like the person I am when it's just us."

The charging dock blinks green.

The black Lincoln idles at the curb outside baggage claim. Newark Liberty. The air smells like jet fuel and damp concrete. You've been in the car for four minutes and Cynthia Sterling has already looked at your shoes twice.

She's in the passenger seat. She hasn't turned around.

"Victoria tells me you're in..." She pauses. "Well. She tells me you're working. That's wonderful."

Victoria is in the back seat next to you. She's been staring out the window since the terminal. Her hand is in her lap. Not touching yours.

"Your father called last week," Cynthia says to Victoria. She adjusts the vent. The air clicks. "He asked if you were seeing anyone. I told him you were still figuring things out." She lets the word sit. "I didn't elaborate. I mean, what would I have said?"

Victoria's hand finds yours. Her fingers are cold. She doesn't look at you when she does it.

"You know, my friend Elaine's daughter, the one at Princeton, she just married a cardiologist. Lovely ceremony. Very tasteful." Cynthia turns now. Not all the way. Her profile catches a passing streetlight. "It's nice when a partner reflects well on you. Don't you think, Victoria?"

Victoria doesn't answer. The streetlights keep passing.

"You're from...?" Cynthia's eyes find you in the rearview mirror. "Where did you say you were from?"

The house is asleep. Cynthia went to bed at nine-fifteen with a cup of chamomile tea and a pointed comment about the guest towels. The central air cycles off. The hallway settles.

You're in Victoria's childhood bedroom.

There's a poster on the wall, some band from the early 2000s, the corners yellowed, the lead singer frozen mid-shout. A bookshelf crammed with paperbacks, spines cracked, the kind of fantasy novels with dragons on the cover. A corkboard with photos pinned to it: Victoria at fifteen, braces, smiling with her whole face. Victoria with a group of girls you don't recognize, all of them in terrible jeans. A ribbon from a track meet. A ticket stub from a concert.

Victoria is sitting on the edge of the bed. Her heels are on the floor next to the nightstand. Her blazer is draped over the desk chair. Bare feet on the carpet. Knees pulled up. She's wearing a faded quilt with flowers on it wrapped around her shoulders.

"I haven't been back in two years," she says. Her voice is quieter, the room is small, she doesn't need to project. "I keep meaning to take this stuff down. Every time I come home, I tell myself..." She gestures at the corkboard. Her hand drops. "But I don't."

She looks at you.

"My mom wasn't always like this." She traces one of the flowers on the quilt with her thumb. "Or maybe she was. I was a kid. You don't notice. You just think everyone's mom picks their clothes and corrects their posture and tells them to smile differently for different rooms."

She looks at the bookshelf. At the cracked-spine paperbacks.

"I was going to be a writer. Fantasy novels. The kind with maps in the front. I had a whole trilogy planned." She gets up. Crosses to the bookshelf. Her fingers hover over the spines without pulling one out. "You know what she said? 'That's a lovely hobby, Victoria. What's your real plan?'"

She doesn't turn around.

"I was nineteen when I stopped. I told myself it was law school. The LSAT. I was busy." Her hand drops from the shelf. "It wasn't that. It was her voice. In my head. Every time I opened the notebook."

She comes back to the bed. Sits. Pulls the quilt tighter.

"I don't know who I am here," she says. She's looking at the braces-girl in the photograph. "With you. Without her voice."

A car passes outside. Headlights sweep across the wall, lighting up the photograph, the ribbon, the ticket stub, then fade.

The apartment is quiet when you get home. Not the good kind. She's in the bathroom with the door not-quite-closed, and the light on.

Through the gap in the door, you can see her. Sitting on the edge of the tub. Her blazer is on the bathroom floor. Her heels are kicked off by the sink. Her phone is in her lap, screen up.

On the counter, face-up: a white plastic stick. Two pink lines.

She looks up. She doesn't say anything for a long moment. Then she holds up the phone.

"I've been trying to write you a text," she says. Her voice is flat. Lawyer-flat. "For forty minutes. I keep deleting it." She turns the screen so you can see. The message box is empty. The cursor blinks. "I can draft a merger agreement in my sleep. I can't type four words to you."

She looks at the phone. Sets it down on the edge of the tub.

"The version for my mother is done," she says. "Three sections. An opening that pre-empts her. A middle that manages her expectations. A closing that reminds her the Sterling name survives another generation. I had it finished in ten minutes." She laughs. One syllable. No air. "The version for you is empty."

She picks up the test. Turns it over in her fingers. The two pink lines. She's looking at them like a document she hasn't finished reading.

"Eight weeks, I think. Which means..." She stops. Does the math out loud, like a filing date. "It means it happened around the holiday party. The one where I introduced you as my roommate." Another syllable-laugh. Nothing behind it. "That's a fun detail. I'll put it in the footnotes."

She sets the test down. Looks at you. For the first time since you walked in, her voice drops.

"I'm pregnant."

She's not smiling.

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