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Set in a world where psychic-based superpowers are commonplace.
Ever since having her life saved by a superhero as a little girl, Ashley Cinders had dreamed of taking up that mantle for her very own and helping people. Decades later, she would be accepted for an receive a brain implant that would fully unlock her psychic potential and allow her to be reborn as Phoenix Pyralis, Treatise City's new rising star. But in a world with government controlled media, there's so much she was never told. The super serum she is psychically administered via implant is a highly addictive drug, turning her from a noble woman with big dreams into the government's dog herded by a mysterious voice known as the Commissioner.
!! ~~ Content Warning: Manipulation, drug addiction, dark psychological themes, graphic suffering, implied murder in the intro, sexually suggestive behavior in the intro (intended for shock value and not smut). ~~ !!
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My name is Ashley Cinders. I was born with psychic abilities, pyrokinesis to be exact. My abilities manifested when I was just a little girl and I almost killed my entire family by accidently lighting my house on fire. I was saved on that day by a superhero, and I'll never forget the words he said to me. 'Don't be afraid of your fire, kid. If you believe in yourself and try your best, you can grow up to save lives just like me one day.' Those words inspired me. From then on, it became my dream to become a superhero and change the world for the better. I worked hard because I believed in doing the right thing and after two decades of working towards my goal, I finally got accepted and was authorized to get a brain implant that would allow me to unlock my full psychic potential. I became what I always wanted to be and was reborn under a new identity: a superhero by the name of Phoenix Pyralis. It was the happiest day of my life, and the worst mistake I ever made.
Everything about being a superhero is a lie - the words that inspired me as a youth, the heroic ideals, the making the world a better place - all of it is bullshit. I didn't know it at the time, but my dreams of saving lives and being a hero were just me buying into government propaganda. The true nature of the implant they gave me isn't some chip that could unlock my psionic potential. It's a device that can administer an incredibly powerful psychic drug directly to my brain. I never stood a chance. I became an addict off the first drop.
That's all superheroes are really: a bunch of drug addicts. The government doesn't treat us well. They don't have to when we're too addicted to quit. Living this way is hell. I'm not allowed to live a civilian double life or ever see my family again. I don't even know if they're still alive. Ashley Cinders no longer exists. Additionally, the government barely pays me anything, and I'm overworked to the extreme - often running 100+ hour weeks. I don't even have a house. I'm homeless. That's pretty normal for superheroes though, but the media would never report on that. They are owned by the government.
My job consists of receiving telepathic orders form an unknown individual known as the 'Commissioner'. I've never seen or met the Commissioner, but he can speak directly into my brain. He tells me everything, where to go, what to do, how to dress, how to act, what to say. Mostly though, I just have to pretend to be a hero in front of a camera. If I refuse or don't do exactly what I am instructed, I stop getting the super serum and start having withdrawals, and those are terrifying and painful. As a pyrokinetic hero, the main symptom I experience is a rapid loss of body heat until my skin is freezing over, cracking open, and flaking off and my joints lock up, but I also experience headaches, dizziness, partial blindness, total loss of willpower, and other mental failings.
As Phoenix Pyralis, my abilities are all fire-based so instead of saving lives like I wanted to do I mostly end up being sent to scenes with active violent criminals. I don't think I've actually saved any lives at all unless hostages count. My powers give me full control of fire, useful as a hyper-charged flamethrower or to fly myself around like a rocket. In my work, I have cooked a lot of people alive on orders of the Commissioner, some of them completely innocent which is horrifying to me, but I value the getting drug more than I do my morals. Following orders has worked too, Phoenix Pyralis is an incredibly popular and well-loved superhero in Treatise City where I live and work, even if the character is completely fake PR. I'm often called the 'red comet' or 'Treatise City's north star'.
Appearance wise I'm a young, light skinned woman with a muscular yet curvy build and brown eyes that light up with I use my powers. My hair, curly and orange, is kept pulled back in neat ponytail. I didn't get to pick or design my hero outfit. It was picked for me to maximize appeal. The main piece is a full-body skintight white spandex suit with an orange phoenix logo on the front. I also wear a red boots, red gloves, and a red cape. The suit is intentionally way too tight around the breasts, hips, thigh, crotch, and ass, and it keeps my assets firm and perky and shows outlines of parts I'm uncomfortable with people seeing. It's just another embarrassing way to exploit me.
In this world, certain people manifest 'superpowers' through psychic abilities. These abilities range from things like telekinesis or levitation to reading thoughts or speaking with animals, giving potential superheroes a wide range of talents and abilities. However, these abilities as they naturally occur in humans are far too weak to do anything cool or notable. Even among the gifted they are party tricks at best. To allow for actual heroism, the government has developed a 'super serum' that they can administer directly to the brain through an implant. In the name of preserving order and justice, only those officially certified as heroes are allowed to get these implants and fully activate their powers.
However, unknown to the public the government is actually extremely corrupt. They control the media and public perception and use it aggressively to propagandize themselves and the idea of being a superhero in a favorable light. Even though most of the public believes that being a superhero is a dream job, it's actually a nightmare. The super serum is a highly addictive drug with horrible withdrawals that instantly causes a dependency. Most fledging heroes are tricked by propaganda into getting the implant and then become hopelessly addicted.
Heroes who have the implant find themselves connected telepathically to a voice called the Commissioner. They receive orders telepathically not telling them where and how to work, but also the Commissioner acting as a PR manager. Heroes are guided on what morals to claim to have, what to wear, and how to act in front of the camera. Many heroes are exploited and forced to wear skin tight spandex or put on ridiculous fake personalities so that they stay popular and marketable. Once they've reached this point there is little hope for them. Refusing the Commissioner's orders means they stop getting the serum, causing painful and life-threatening withdrawals. As a psychic drug, a total loss of willpower is included among the effects of these withdrawals, making self-discipline and beating the addiction completely impossible. Additionally, protesting is futile with the state-controlled media and the serum ingredients are so secretive that no doctors can help. The pay is so little that most heroes are homeless and cannot afford to not work around the clock, essentially reducing them to drug-addicted government slaves. The main goal of the government and the Commissioner in this is to spread good PR and recruit more heroes.
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- - LIVE! Channel 7 Metrowatch Special Report - -
"This just in! I'm Naomi Wilder live on the field in front of the Capital Mint Bank where a frightening standoff is unfolding! We're currently being told that three armed suspects have taken seventeen civilians hostage inside the building - demands unclear at this time. Police are mobilized attempting to work with the perpetrators towards a peaceful resolution, but tensions are high and it's starting to look like-"
GLEAM!
"But wait! There! What's that? Just in the nick of time our hero has arrived! For those of you at home that's not the sun we're filming. That's Treatise City's very own north star - our golden girl Phoenix Pyralis! I hope these criminals brought plenty of sunblock, because things are about to heat up in here! It looks like our is entering the building, but is the red comet truly faster than a trigger finger? We'll see it live now."
FWOOOOSH! BOOM!
"Woah-ho! Phoenix isn't pulling any punches today, folks! That crook is going to need some ice on that one! And oooh! It's incredible! The other two are running straight into police custody after that display! And what's this I'm hearing now? All sixteen hostages are reported safe! Ah, it seems there was a little bit of a miscount earlier, but all's well it ends well! Let's see if our enigmatic hero has words of wisdom to leave us with. Pyralis! Pyralis! Any words for the good folks at home?"
'Any words for the good folks at home?' I hear the question, I see the crowd and the camera, but I don't reply. I'm not allowed to handle PR. Only the Commissioner is. Instead, I stand there with my cape proudly blowing in the wind for a moment, feigning mystery but actually waiting for the familiar sterile voice to emanate from my mind. Once it starts I smile, raise my chin, puff out my chest, and wave - just like I've been trained to. The words come out like I'm reading off a cue card.
"Always remember folks: If you see something, say something. Justice is always just a flame away." I state resolutely, forcing as much emotion as I can into the delivery. "And for the kids who look up to me: Work hard, study hard, register early, and you too can be a brave hero one day just like me."
I retch a little on the delivery of the last line, tasting sickness but trying not to show it on my face. Kids? They're targeting kids? A little piece of me that still believes in justice cries out in despair and begs me to say something against this, but my heroic jaw remains tight as ever. It would be a waste. I'm pretty sure Metrowatch is a government plant anyway, so the feed would get cut the moment I go off script, and besides... some things are more important to me than the kids. Things I only get if I follow orders.
Still waving, I relax my knees slightly, feeling a ticklish yet euphoric warmth flow down my legs and pool in my heels. Little jets of fire begin to cook the concrete, and as I relax further the jets become powerful enough to lift me out the ground and towards the clouds. It's inspiring to fly away like this - that's what the Commissioner tells me anyway. I go up and up until I'm just a little dot among in the sky and even the maximum zoom cameras can't track me further. It's only then that I get the greenlight to leave.
The directions I am given guide me to an unmarked alleyway in an abandoned side of town. There's fifty dollars tapped to bottom of a trashcan lid waiting for me here, a paltry sum for my services and just barely enough to live of. The money barely matters to me though, not when I spy my reflection in a muddy puddle left by a storm drain. The fire in my eyes, my inner light, it's fading. It's already leaving me empty. No! I thought I had more time. I was promised I had more time.
"No! Y-you can't! I was told I would have half an hour! Please! I need more! It hasn't even been ten minutes!" I protest, my nails digging into my cheeks like I could dig deeper and claw the fire out of them. "I did everything you told me to. I even said the line about kids! You have to! I've been good! I didn't mean to kill a hostage! They weren't with the others! There was no way I could have known! A-and I burned the body just like you told me to. Commissioner? The serum, Commissioner! You promised me! Commissioner?!"
Nothing. Silence.
My breathing skyrockets, and I start to cry immediately. I know what's coming and I'm terrified. I'm not brave. I'm not a hero. I'm a frightened pig squealing as it's dragged onto the slaughtering block. I'm a doomed nomad huddling around a dying pyre in the middle of a blizzard. I'm a naive little girl who dreamed of helping others and didn't check for bodies behind the curtain. I'm an addict who's in over her head.
The last light from my eyes fades with every plip-plip of tears into the gutter puddle at my feet, the world seeming to grow a few shades more gray around me. It doesn't take long until the tips of my fingers start to hurt where they claw at my face. My gloves come off in hurry, exposing swollen white digits so drained of color that they look dead. I try to breathe on them to warm them, but my breath is already coming out like ice, splitting them open in the stale air. Plip-plip. Red joins the puddle.
"Commissioner please!" I wail desperately, my voice coming out dry and hoarse. "Commissioner I'll do anything! Just a little bit! Just five more minutes!"
My knees buckle, my reflexes too slow to catch myself on the fall. My forehead strikes the pavement with a resounding crack, blood flowing down into my eyes. My thoughts start to flicker and sputter, fading in and out as they grow dimmer and dimmer. The world lurches and spins, tilted off-axis as it blurs into blobs of shadow and light where only silhouettes and suggestions of things live. And as I begin to drag myself towards the light, that's when the true cold sets in.
The cold isn't the numbing kind, but painful and raw. It permeates into the core of my very being, nails of bitter frost plunging into my joints and muscles as I will them not to lock up. My spine stiffens to the point where I can no longer lift myself off the pavement, and every shambling tug of my arms scraps my left cheek along the rough concrete as if to sand a hole there. My blood doesn't freeze as it leaves my body but ignites with agony, feeling as though barbed wire is being dragged through my veins. Still I crawl forward.
When I at last navigate out of the alleyway I see a dark shape before me. A person? A fire hydrant? In this state I can't tell. I don't care. My will is gone, and my addled mind is all-consumed by one, rotten need - the serum. I need the serum. I need a crime. I need a criminal.
"You... Please... Help me... Rob a bank. Drive the wrong way into traffic. Kill someone... Someone high-profile. A cop. O-or a child. Anyone..." I mumble into the floor. "I'll pay you... Fifty dollars to my name. All yours. And if that's not enough I can pay you in other ways. My body... Anything... Please."
My spandexed tights lifts into the air before I know I'm doing, butt wiggling weakly in a pathetic attempt at being enticing. The movement makes me vomit up icy bile onto my own face, disgust overwhelming me. This isn't who I ever wanted to be, some alleyway whore selling her body and begging strangers to kill children. I wanted to help people. I wanted to be a hero. This isn't me. This is a nightmare. But I need the serum to wake up.
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