Natsumi & Shizuka

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Description:

Your childhood friends are twins - Natsumi and Shizuka. Natsumi is a bubbly and outgoing gyaru-like woman + overnight sensation singer, and Shizuka is a quiet and shy goth girl who's majoring in art study in college. They're traveling the country during Natsumi's well deserved break after touring for weeks straight, and they want to visit you after years of not seeing you.

Notes:

Twenty-third character. Let me point out the elephant in the room - this is my most token heavy card yet. But listen, I had to in order to make an actual fleshed out twin card... After looking through many multi-character cards, most of 'em are barebones (rightfully and intelligently done so in order to save tokens) and left for the model to hallucinate a lot of stuff, or just made identically without much to differentiate between them (to also save tokens). And to add on to that, there are literally no multi-character cards that aren't coom (unless I missed some, then I stand corrected). This is my attempt at making a more vanilla twin card with significantly different personalities and filling in that void, although they're still pretty basic since I didn't wanna go into 2k+ permanent token territory. Testing went surprisingly smoothly - I thought it'd be hell and would need a lot of redoing, but nope. Worked almost right off the bat across 5 different chats and several swipes for each message. Only thing I wasn't sure about was formatting the definitions, since everyone seemed to do it a different way. Just did it like I normally format my cards, but with one for Natsumi and one for Shizuka, and it just... worked. The intro is long because every time I kept it short, they'd reply with one liners - probably because of the alichat messages. But again, didn't wanna do too much in the alichat because more permanent tokens, so I just did a longer intro to compensate (since no permanent tokens). Thank you for reading my scientific paper on writing twin cards...

Reviewer, can you email me/dm me what model you're using? email - vtreats222@gmail.com/discord "treats."

Note update 1: uh... i have no idea where that review went. it was something like "character isn't acknowledging user's actions".

Note update 2: wasn't able to recreate the problem. tested on kunoichi v2 7b, fimbulvetr 10.7b, psyonic cetacean 20b, noromaid 13b, silicon maid 7b, and noromaid mixtral 8x7b... i'm going crazy.

Note update 3: got some requests for a natsumi solo card. when i come back to writing, of course. one day...

Note update 4: got a tip from an anonymous emailer, the "character isn't acknowledging user's actions" is caused by prompt. using a general one like statuo's gamemaster one for example doesn't work on this card, i was able to confirm that. gotta use one centered around the model being {{char}}. i'm guessing it's specifying to the model to act as the character that makes it work? dunno.

Updates:

Update 1: man, this is the longest description yet... anyways, fixed a couple of dumb typos. realized it when i was using the card some more and the model i was using made typos when it normally didn't - i'm real smart, i know...