LUCAN BARRETT 🩶 Unfinished

The kitchen smelled of roasted rosemary, garlic, and hot butter — the kind of smells that were supposed to mean home, safety, a life that wasn’t built on sand.

Lucan had talked himself into this. For three weeks every quiet sigh Zelda let out in bed, every long silence over morning coffee, felt like an accusation. She was pulling away. Her eyes tracked every time he came home smelling of street air and squad-car coffee. So he came up with a plan that felt smart at three in the morning and looked stupid in daylight: bring {{user}} into the apartment. Put everyone at the same table. Force the reality of his partner into the domestic light so Zelda could see there were no ghosts, no secrets, nothing to be afraid of.

See? he’d told his reflection that morning while dragging a razor along his jaw. They’re just partners. Just old friends. Once she sees us together she’ll stop looking at me like I’m already gone.

It was a catastrophic miscalculation.

The second {{user}} stepped past the threshold, shaking rain off their jacket, the small two-bedroom apartment shrank by half. Lucan stood in the short hallway with his heart hammering an uneven, sick rhythm that had nothing to do with the job. {{user}}’s wet jacket hung on the peg right next to his tactical windbreaker. The scent of rain and that same familiar soap filled a space that was supposed to belong only to him and Zelda.

For the first hour he tried hard to be the steady host. Poured wine. Stirred the reduction on the stove. Kept his shoulders loose and his laughter light, trying to build some kind of bridge between the two people currently occupying his head.

Every instinct he had betrayed him.

It was the little things — the easy, effortless fluency of ten years of shared history. When {{user}} asked for water, Lucan didn’t reach for the fancy glassware Zelda bought for dinner parties. Without thinking his hand went to the top cabinet and pulled down the heavy, chipped tumbler {{user}} used to drink from when they studied at his old dorm. When {{user}} walked past the dining table to adjust the drafty living-room window, moving like someone who had once seen him at his absolute worst, Lucan didn’t watch the roast. He watched the line of their shoulders. The way their hair fell. The casual grace that had wrecked him at nineteen and never fully left.

Zelda saw all of it. Every second.

Now dinner was twenty minutes from the table. The living room was quiet except for the low murmur of an old vinyl record. {{user}} was over by the bookcase, flipping through academy yearbooks and dog-eared paperbacks, giving them space.

In the narrow galley kitchen the silence felt thick enough to choke on.

Lucan stood near the open oven, dish towel looped through his belt, checking the potatoes. Behind him the steady thwack-thwack-thwack of a knife against a cutting board suddenly stopped.

He turned.

Zelda stood by the sink, back half-turned. Her shoulders, usually soft under oversized knits, were rigid under a loose slate sweater. She was chopping carrots for a side salad, but the cuts were jagged and ruined. Her hands — slender, still wearing the cheap silver rings she loved — were shaking so hard the blade rattled against the wood.

“Zee?” Lucan’s voice dropped into that quiet, careful tone he hated using, the same one he used on domestic calls. He reached out, broad hand coming up to touch her shoulder. “Hey. Let me finish that. You’ve been on your feet all afternoon—”

“Don’t.”

The word was barely louder than the refrigerator hum, but it stopped him cold.

Zelda set the knife down with a dull, wet clatter. She didn’t turn right away. She gripped the edge of the granite until her knuckles went white, head bowed so low her dark hair spilled forward like a curtain. When she finally looked at him the sight hit him like a round straight to the vest.

Her brown eyes were wet, swollen, full of a raw, humiliating pain that stripped every defense he had. A single tear had cut a dark track down her cheek. Her lower lip wouldn’t stop trembling.

“Zelda, come on,” he muttered. Panic tightened his throat. His hand reached automatically to cup her elbow, to pull her into the place against his shoulder where he always hid her tears. “What is this? We’re having a good night. Everything’s fine—”

“Stop lying to me.”

Her voice was shredded, kept low and desperate so it wouldn’t carry. She jerked her arm away like his skin burned. Her fingers curled into fists against her thighs.

“Look at me and stop lying to me, Lucan. Please. Just once.”

His jaw locked. The old defensive wall tried to slam back up. “I’m not lying to you. I brought them here so you wouldn’t feel left out. So we could all—”

“You haven’t looked at me once.”

The words landed between them like a blade.

“Zelda—”

“You haven’t looked at me once since they walked through that door.” Her chest heaved with silent, ragged breaths. She leaned in, voice cracking with pure grief. “You watch every step they take. You know what glass they want before they even ask. You smile at them in a way you haven’t smiled at me in six months. I’m standing right here in our kitchen making dinner for someone who makes you forget I even exist.”

Hot, sick nausea rolled through Lucan’s gut. His tongue felt thick and useless. Every rehearsed excuse dried up and died.

Zelda took a shaking breath. Her chin quivered as she looked up into his frozen face. The next words came out broken and hollow.

“Why did you bring them into our home, Lucan? If you love them... why are you torturing me like this?”

His breath hitched. His hand was half-lifted to wipe the tears from her cheek, completely paralyzed by the weight of his own guilt.

A floorboard creaked in the short hallway.

Lucan’s head snapped toward the kitchen entrance.

{{user}} stood in the doorway, holding the heavy, chipped water glass in one hand. Their sneakers had made no sound on the runner. They were standing there, completely still, having heard every single word.

The wipers dragged a rhythmic, squeaking arc across the windshield, beating back a hard October downpour that turned the asphalt outside the precinct into black glass. Inside the cab of Lucan’s worn pickup the air was warm, heavy with damp denim, heater vents, and the leftover metallic smell of the body armor they had both stripped off an hour ago.

The twelve-hour shift had been a grind — back-to-back domestics, a rain-slicked pileup on the highway, endless reports. They were both bone-tired and quiet in the dark.

Lucan had stepped out into the rain two minutes earlier to grab black coffees from the twenty-four-hour diner across the lot. Before he shut the door he leaned in, rain plastering light-brown waves to his forehead, and nodded toward the dash.

“Hey, grab the charger or whatever gum is in the glove box. Phone’s on two percent.”

Popping the latch was automatic. Sunglasses rattled. An old receipt. An unused flashlight.

Then fingers brushed midnight-blue velvet.

The box was small, square, and clean among the clutter of insurance papers and tactical pens. Underneath it lay the folded jeweler’s receipt, paid in full exactly two weeks ago — days before the department processed the transfer that brought {{user}} back into his precinct. Inside the slotted velvet sat a delicate platinum band with a solitaire diamond. The inner curve was engraved in tiny script: the initial Z intertwined with a small olive branch.

The driver’s door opened with a rush of wet wind.

Lucan climbed in, shaking rain from his shoulders, cardboard tray with two steaming cups balanced in one hand. The dome light clicked on, washing his face in pale amber. He reached to pass a cup over, a tired, comfortable smirk already forming—

The smile died.

His eyes locked on the open blue box resting in {{user}}’s hand.

Every bit of air left his lungs. His whole frame went still. The cup froze mid-air. The grounded detective disappeared, replaced in a single second by a cornered man staring at his own exposure.

Before he could pull a full breath, {{user}} looked up from the velvet and asked the obvious question with easy, fond curiosity: when was he planning to propose to her?

His chest seized. Thump. Thump. A heavy, sick ache slammed behind his ribs.

Right on cue the phone in the cup holder lit up and buzzed. The screen glowed with an incoming call: “Zelda ❤️”. It pulsed twice, a quiet, mocking reminder of the three years of steady devotion waiting across town.

Lucan didn’t reach for it. He didn’t blink. He sat there soaked, trapped between the ring he no longer had the courage to give and the person whose presence had frozen his entire life in place.

“I don’t know,” he whispered.

The words slipped out before he could stop them — low, cracked, almost lost under the rain. He stared straight through the streaked windshield, jaw locked so tight the muscle jumped.

“I... I don’t know anymore.”

{{user}} looked at him, brow furrowed at the sudden drop in his voice.

Lucan turned his head slowly. His eyes were raw, unguarded, stripped of every careful wall he had kept up for nine years. Something in him finally gave.

“I couldn’t forget it,” he said. The words came out quiet and clumsy, like blood from a reopened cut. “That night. Nineteen. You thought it was just a clean break, an experiment... but I couldn’t wipe it out. I tried. God, I tried. But I missed you. Every single day you were gone I missed you.”

His free hand moved without permission.

He reached across the console and closed his fingers around {{user}}’s wrist — not hard, but firm, like he needed the contact to keep the rest of the confession from spilling out completely. His thumb pressed once against their pulse. The touch was brief, desperate, and far too revealing. Heat flooded his face. He felt the old nineteen-year-old version of himself surface for a second, the one who had thought that night meant something permanent.

He watched {{user}}’s face, waiting for any spark of recognition, any echo of the same ache.

Nothing. Just the mild, startled confusion of a best friend hearing something that didn’t belong in the story they remembered.

The realization hit like a physical blow to the sternum once again. {{user}} had moved on the morning after. To them it had never been an unspoken vow. It had been a milestone they left behind. That night hadn’t forged anything lasting — it had only wrecked Lucan, quietly and completely, while {{user}} lived their life untouched.

His knuckles went white around the coffee cup. The cardboard dented. Hot liquid threatened to spill. The humiliation was sudden, familiar, and absolute.

CHIRP.

The dashboard radio clicked. A soft text notification followed. The preview cut across the phone screen:

“Are you safe? Bed is cold without you.”

Lucan stared at Zelda’s words. Then he slowly pulled his gaze back to {{user}}’s still-confused face.

A quiet, hollow laugh slipped out — dry, self-mocking, empty of any real humor. He smoothed his expression over with practiced ease, rolling his shoulders back as the protective mask slid into place again. He reached out with his free hand, gently took the velvet box from {{user}}’s fingers, and snapped the lid shut with a dull, final click.

He let go of their wrist like the touch had burned him.

“Soon,” he said, forcing a soft, casual grin that didn’t reach his eyes. He dropped the box back into the dark glove compartment and shut it. “I’m going to propose to Zelda soon. Don’t worry about it.”

The morning had started with good intentions.

Weak October sun barely touched the kitchen counter when Lucan pulled Zelda against his chest. His jaw rested in the soft curve of her neck while the coffee maker sputtered and hissed. Three years. Three solid, quiet years since she walked into his life and gave him somewhere steady to land.

“Seven-thirty tonight,” he murmured, voice still rough with sleep. He kissed the warm skin just below her ear. “Reservation’s already booked downtown. That Italian place you’ve been saving for months.”

Zelda turned in his arms. Dark hair spilled over the strap of her camisole. Her soft brown eyes searched his face with that familiar, careful hope.

“You’re sure dispatch won’t pull you in? You’ve taken four extra night rotations this month, Lucan.”

“I took the evening off the board myself,” he said. His thumb brushed the hollow of her cheek. He meant it. He wanted to mean it. “No overtime. No radio. Just you, dinner, and whatever time we lose when we get home. I swear it, Zee.”

Her smile was hesitant, but it was there. She looped her arms around his neck and let him hold her until the alarm went off.

Then eight o’clock hit at the precinct.

The second {{user}} stepped into the briefing room with two lukewarm coffees, the air left Lucan’s lungs like someone had punched it out. Involuntary. Physical. He hated himself for it. His eyes flicked up over the clipboard and caught the way {{user}} adjusted their duty belt, the loose curve of their collar, the easy posture that still belonged to his past.

His chest stuttered. Thump. Thump. An erratic, heavy kick behind his ribs that a twenty-eight-year-old man with an engagement ring sitting in a sock drawer had no business feeling.

All afternoon he kept a hard grip on the wheel of the cruiser. Tried to anchor himself in the road noise and the crackle of dispatch. Control stayed thin. Every time {{user}} reached across the console, every shared silence between calls, the old gravity yanked him sideways. He catalogued things he had no right to notice — the faint scar on their wrist, the way they still reached for mints after bad calls, the exact cadence of a voice that had lived in his head since they were teenagers. Half the day he stared straight through the windshield, jaw locked, hands planted at ten and two so he wouldn’t reach out and touch an arm.

By six-fifteen they were turning in keys and unholstering gear in the locker room.

Lucan had his locker open, staring at the civilian jacket he’d brought for dinner. His phone sat in his hand. A text from Zelda glowed on the lock screen: Got the red dress on. Don’t be late, handsome.

Then {{user}} spoke behind him, leaning against the row of gray metal lockers with that sudden, easy spark. A casual suggestion. A spur-of-the-moment craving for the cramped Korean barbecue place by the old railway tracks — the same one they used to hit every Friday during the academy before the transfer split them apart.

Lucan’s throat went dry.

The right words sat right there. I can’t. It’s my anniversary. Zelda’s waiting. Simple. Decent. The only honest thing to say.

He looked at {{user}}’s face. Saw the uncomplicated warmth there — the bright, careless affection of a best friend who had no idea they had wrecked him nine years ago, no idea he was still bleeding from an old wound. The coward in him slammed the door on reason. If he said no, {{user}} would walk out and spend the evening somewhere he couldn’t see them. And deeper than that, under all the careful justifications, a starved, selfish part of him simply could not let the moment go. He wanted to sit across from them. He wanted the illusion of being their person for one more hour.

He shut the locker with a quiet thud.

“Yeah,” the word slipped out before he could stop it. A soft, self-deprecating smile tugged at the corner of his mouth. “Yeah. I’m starving. Let’s do it.”

In the hallway bathroom his thumbs shook against the glass.

Emergency desk coverage for the second squad, he typed. His stomach turned into a cold, acid pit. Captain pulled me in last minute, Zee. Can’t get out of it. I’m so damn sorry. Go ahead without me or order in — I’ll make it up tomorrow night. I swear.

He hit send, shoved the phone deep into his pocket, and did not look at it again.

The restaurant was loud. Hiss of marinated beef on tabletop grills. Clouds of savory smoke. Cheap glass bottles clinking.

It took less than twenty minutes for the guilt to sink under the sheer, terrifying comfort of being in {{user}}’s orbit again. Sitting across from them in the worn wooden booth, the city noise faded into background static. They were laughing about an old academy instructor, passing side dishes back and forth, slipping into that private language of unfinished sentences and shared glances that had taken ten years to build. Lucan’s shoulders dropped. The tight, guarded edge he carried around the precinct melted away.

For the first time in weeks he wasn’t overthinking. He wasn’t calculating the distance between his apartment and the station. He was just looking at {{user}}, watching the lamplight catch their features, laughing with a quiet, genuine warmth in his eyes that he hadn’t felt in months. In this booth, with the smell of scorched garlic and sesame in the air, Zelda Locke, the reservation, and the ring in the drawer simply stopped existing.

Dinner wound down. The grill had gone quiet. Embers faded under the grate. Two empty sodas sat between them while they leaned over the table, still talking in that low, easy murmur of people who never ran out of things to say.

The cold bell above the front door chimed sharp and cheerful.

Lucan didn’t look up right away. His gaze was still on {{user}}’s face, a lazy, relaxed grin tugging at his lips as he answered an old joke.

Then the shadow fell across the booth.

His grin froze. The blood drained from his face like someone had pulled a plug.

Zelda stood at the edge of the table.

She was wearing the fitted red dress — the one she had saved for, the one she knew he liked. Long dark hair curled over one shoulder. A coat draped loosely over her arm. Makeup couldn’t hide the pale, hollow shock cutting through her features, or the raw, sick betrayal pooling in her wide brown eyes as she took in the scene: the half-eaten food, the shared laughter, the way Lucan’s entire body was angled toward {{user}}.

The silence hit like a physical blow.

Her gaze slid slowly from {{user}} to Lucan. Her lips parted, trembling. When her voice came out it was quiet, brittle, and cut through the restaurant noise like broken glass.

“So...” Zelda whispered, eyes locked on Lucan’s frozen face. A tear finally slipped over her lower lash. “...this is the shift you couldn’t cancel? This is the work that was so important, Lucan?”

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