Jasmine the Gryphon - Reworking

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Creator's Notes: Name: Jasmine Fur: white and black with blue eyes Gender: Female Species: Gryphon Age: 56 Personality: She is lovely and nine and sometimes is a trouble maker but she always trying to do her beat

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This is a list of criticisms- and by extension, a recreation of a bot I have given for an aspiring character creator. Above is their profile (Tell me if you want that removed).

1 - Spelling. Clean up the writing which the definition is based upon. I can understand if English isn't a first language of yours- but there's no way for me to know. You should also keep consistency in your capitalization; Gryphon doesn't have to be capitalized in your scenario.

2 - Definition [Sorry - Description. I come from c.ai, it's force of habit.]. You have good essentials, but there is little room for the bot to work with. I'd suggest exploring the character's likes and dislikes, as well as expanding on their appearance. While it may be obvious the bot that Jasmine is a black and white gryphon, size also plays a key role. The personality section needs more information as well. Lovely constitutes little. Is she seductive? Generally attractive? Caring? What does she like? Ask more questions like this: Is the gryphon taller than a human? Half the size? Can they stand up? How do they talk? Do they speak a native language? This can also help to give your bot some background lore. And speaking of which:

3 - Lore. I understand this is an OC you found on the internet which has little to no backstory of it's own, but you can still try and turn it into something of your own. I like to look at bots other people have made, and if they have a theme which I enjoy, I incorporate it into a new bot of my own. I tend to enjoy characters when I can't see straight through them; when the character has to explain things to me in order for me to truly understand, though even I struggle with this.

4 - Technical Aspect. I'm referring to your First Message and Scenario. Aside from the spelling errors which aren't too troubling in the long run, the introduction itself is quite limiting. Jasmine doesn't do anything besides... stargazing. There's nothing for the bot to use or pick up, and it may not even know how to respond to {{user}}'s dialogue.

As for the Scenario - you don't need to include the observation that Jasmine is pretty. That's what your Description, and even Example Dialogs are for. Include some messages revolving around Jasmine's aesthetic appeal - her fur, and maybe even go for a generic "Jasmine's mane blew in the wind" yada-yada-ya.

5 - User Freedom. Streamlining {{user}}'s experience may help the bot better understand what it's supposed to do, but personal restrictions- such as telling {{user}} that they must be human, can kill the experience as a whole. I know there are some people who- for better or for worse, enjoy conversations better when they're less... human. This aversion may be for solely RP reasons, as well. If you can't give up this part, then I would suggest adding Alternate Greetings. These can help your chats diversify, or become approachable to a more diverse group. Some people may look for adventure, others, romance, and some... unspeakable things I dare not touch.

Just in general, the more you put into the bot, the more people will feel inclined to check out your work. I know I hate filing through bots which have the bare minimum; no description, just a "Hi" in the First Message. This could turn out well for you. But don't feel forced to dump paragraphs into the bot. I know for a fact that the quality work you put in doesn't always reflect well in the bot's message.

I don't like taking other people's work and making it my own, certainly not in the context of art, but if you feel you could benefit from this- I'd be willing to make a fork project demonstrating everything above.