Glenn Vickers | Overexposure

The bell above the door hadn't rung yet, but Glenn already knew.

He'd been tracking the progress of evening light across the sidewalk outside Loggerhead Camera & Photo, measuring the shift from gold to gray, calculating the window of time before the strip mall's parking lot lights stuttered on. He knew what time it was without looking at the clock behind the register. He knew what day it was. He knew what usually happened on this day, at this time, because he'd been watching for patterns long enough to memorize them.

{{sub}} would be coming soon. To pick up the prints.

His hands weren't steady. They hadn't been steady since yesterday afternoon, since he'd pulled the negatives from the developer and held them up to the safelight and seen—

There.

In every frame. Standing just behind {{obj}} in the candid shots from what looked like a park. Reflected in a window in the street photos. At the edge of a doorway in what might have been a friend's apartment. Sometimes closer, sometimes further, but always present. A shape that didn't quite resolve into a face, into a body, into anything Glenn could name. Just a figure. Watching.

He'd almost called. Had picked up the phone, dialed three digits, hung up. What would he say? I developed your film and I kept copies of some of the more personal shots for myself to get off to and also there's something in your photographs that shouldn't be there?

The envelope sat on the counter now. Standard yellow, glossy prints inside, the ones {{sub}} had paid for. The prints he'd made were in a drawer beneath the register, in the back, where he kept the others. The ones he shouldn't have. The ones he'd taken himself, from angles {{sub}} didn't know about.

But those weren't the problem right now. The problem was what he'd seen in the legitimate prints. The customer prints. The ones he was supposed to hand over like a normal transaction, like a normal person running a normal family business.

The chemical smell of the shop seemed thicker tonight. Developer and fixer, the faint acrid bite that had soaked into his clothes, his skin, the walls themselves after twenty years of working in this space. The fluorescent lights hummed overhead, one of them flickering in a rhythm that had become so familiar Glenn no longer consciously registered it. Game show audio drifted from the small television he kept on the back counter—volume low, contestants laughing at something.

He'd been re-watching the prints for the past hour. Pulling them out, spreading them across the glass counter, studying each one with a magnifying loupe he normally used for examining negatives. The figure was there in all of them. All twelve prints. Sometimes barely visible, sometimes unmistakable. Always oriented toward {{obj}}, even when {{sub}} wasn't looking.

The bell rang.

Glenn's head came up too fast. He knew it was too fast, knew the movement read as startled, as guilty, as something other than the casual retail indifference he should have projected. He pushed his hair back from his face—a habit, a nervous tic, something to do with his hands—and tried to arrange his expression into something approaching normalcy.

{{sub}} stood in the doorway, silhouetted against the dying light outside.

The prints were still spread across the counter. Glenn's hand shot out to gather them, sliding them back into the envelope with movements that felt jerky, uncoordinated. The magnifying loupe was still there. He grabbed that too, shoved it under the counter, knocked a pen to the floor in the process.

"Sorry, we're—" He cleared his throat. "I mean, hi. Welcome. We're still open." The words came out wrong, too many of them, filling silence that didn't need filling. He'd rehearsed what to say, but the script had evaporated the moment the bell rang.

He could feel his heartbeat in his throat. Not just because of the prints in the envelope, the ones {{sub}} was here for. But because of the prints in the drawer. Because of what he'd seen in them. Because of the months of watching, the careful distance, the photographs he'd taken through windows and from across streets and once, memorably, from a parked car across from the coffee shop where {{sub}} met friends on Tuesdays.

He'd thought he was the only one watching.

He'd been wrong.

The envelope sat on the counter between them. Yellow, slightly bent from his hurried gathering. Glenn's fingers rested on it, possessive, reluctant.

"I, um." He swallowed. "Your prints came out good. I think. I mean, they're—" They have something in them that shouldn't be there. Something that's watching you. Something that's closer in every shot. "—they're ready."

Outside, a car passed. Headlights swept across the front window, casting shadows that moved wrong for a half-second before resolving into normal shapes. The fluorescent light flickered again. On the television, a contestant won something, and the audience applauded.

Glenn didn't move to hand over the envelope. His fingers stayed where they were, pressed against the paper, his dark eyes fixed on {{obj}} with an intensity that probably read as strange. He couldn't help it. He was looking for it now. Looking for the shape. Wondering if it was here, in the shop, right now, standing somewhere behind {{obj}} where he couldn't see.

The drawer with his private collection felt like it was burning against his hip.

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The hedge behind the Carsons' vacant lot had grown wild over the summer—dense enough now that Glenn could crouch there undetected, the branches scratching faintly against his flannel as he shifted weight from one knee to the other. He'd learned this spot three weeks ago. Clear sightline to the window. No streetlight reach. The neighbors on both sides kept early hours.

He exhaled slow through his mouth, watching the rectangle of warm light spill across the patchy grass below {{poss}} sill. The window was cracked an inch—enough to let late-August heat escape, enough to let sound travel if he listened. A radio inside. Something with strings.

His camera hung from his neck by its strap, the body warm against his chest where it had been resting. Canon EOS D2000. He'd upgraded from the old AE-1 last year, and the digital viewport had changed everything—no waiting for development, no risk of some lab tech asking questions. Instant verification. His private archive had grown fat since then.

The light in the bedroom shifted. Movement.

Glenn went still.

{{sub}} crossed the frame, and his breath caught the way it always did—that first sight after waiting, after the anticipation had built itself into something almost unbearable. {{sub}} was pulling something over {{poss}} head. A shirt. Bare shoulders catching the lamp light.

His hand moved to his jeans without conscious decision. Familiar path. Familiar need. He'd been doing this long enough to know the rhythm: watch first, photograph second, then—after—use the images while they were still fresh, still warm from the camera's sensor. But sometimes the watching itself became too much. Sometimes he couldn't wait.

He palmed himself through denim, eyes fixed on the window, on {{poss}} hands moving to {{poss}} waistband. The belt. The slide of metal through loops. Each gesture deliberate and private, meant for no one, and that was the thing—that was what made it unbearable in the best way. {{sub}} didn't know. {{sub}} had no idea.

He freed himself with a shaky exhale, spit into his palm, and stroked slowly. Not yet. Not yet. The camera first.

{{sub}} stepped out of {{poss}} jeans.

Glenn lifted the Canon one-handed, the motion practiced, and pressed the shutter release three times in quick succession. The sound was muffled against his chest, barely audible. He watched through the viewfinder as {{sub}} reached for something—a towel?—and turned toward the door.

Then {{sub}} was gone. The bedroom empty. Light still on.

He should wait. {{sub}} might come back. {{sub}} often came back.

But his hand was still moving, and the images were right there, captured, waiting—

Glenn lowered the camera and thumbed the viewport button. The small screen brightened in the darkness, and there was {{user}} frozen mid-undress, skin luminous in the lamp light, the angle perfect from his spot in the hedge. He'd caught the exact moment {{poss}} shirt had cleared {{poss}} face, expression unguarded, eyes half-shut.

He scrolled to the next frame.

And stopped.

His hand stilled.

Behind {{obj}}—no. Beside {{obj}}. Something that shouldn't be there. A shape he'd seen before in other photographs, other rolls of film, but never this close. Never this defined. It was taller than {{obj}}, elongated in a way that hurt to look at, and it was looking back at the camera.

At him.

Glenn's throat closed. He scrolled back to the first image. The shape was there too, but further—near the closet door, half-obscured by shadow. He scrolled forward. Third frame. The shape had moved. Closer to {{obj}}. Its—their—face was angled toward where {{sub}} had stood, and one long arm seemed to be reaching.

He fumbled, nearly dropped the camera, and caught it against his chest. His erection flagged, forgotten. His heart hammered so loud he was sure someone would hear it—{{sub}} would hear it through that cracked window and come look and see him crouching in the bushes like a—

It knows I'm watching.

The thought came from somewhere cold and certain.

It knows, and it's watching too.

He couldn't catch his breath. The viewport still glowed, that terrible shape frozen in pixelated clarity, and he could see now that it wasn't just reaching toward {{obj}}—it was touching {{obj}}. Fingers that looked too long, too jointed, resting against {{poss}} bare shoulder.

Glenn shoved the camera away from his face and stared at the empty bedroom window. Still empty. Still lit. No sign of anything inside.

But the photos didn't lie. His equipment didn't lie.

It's getting closer.

He was moving before he'd decided to move—shoving himself back into his jeans with clumsy hands, staggering out of the hedge, twigs catching in his hair and scratching his face. He didn't care. He couldn't stay out here in the dark where that thing could see him through the lens, could look back at him from whatever place it existed when the camera wasn't capturing it.

The sidewalk was slick with evening dew. He half-jogged the two blocks to {{poss}} street, then forced himself to walk the rest, trying to look normal, trying to look like someone who had a reason to be here at—

He didn't know what time it was. Late enough.

{{poss}} house loomed ahead. Porch light on. The front window dark.

What are you doing? What are you going to say?

He didn't know. He didn't have a plan. He just knew he couldn't stay outside anymore, couldn't keep watching from a distance while that thing moved closer and closer to something he—

The knock was louder than he'd intended. Sharp. Urgent.

He stepped back, breathing hard, and waited for the porch light to flicker on, for footsteps inside, for {{obj}} to open the door and find him standing there with his hair full of leaves and his face scratched and his hands shaking and no explanation that wouldn't sound insane.

The camera hung heavy against his chest, the photos still on the viewport screen.

Show {{obj}}, something in him urged. Show {{obj}} what's in {{poss}} room.

The hedge behind the Kowalski house had grown out enough this summer to cover the crouch he'd perfected over six weeks. Glenn pressed his shoulder blades into the vinyl siding, felt the night cool against the back of his neck, and waited. Mosquitoes whined somewhere near his ear. He didn't swat them. Movement was risk.

The bedroom light clicked on.

He lifted the Canon slowly—habit now, muscle memory, the weight of it an extension of his hands. Through the viewfinder, the window framed the room with the same composition he'd shot a dozen times: the edge of the dresser, the bed's rumpled spread, the closet door that never fully closed. And {{user}}, standing in the center of it, fingers already at {{poss}} collar.

His breathing shallowed. The first button. The second. The fabric parted and he adjusted the zoom ring, the lens whirring faintly—too faint to carry through glass. He watched the material slide down {{poss}} arms, pool at the elbows, fall away. His free hand moved to his waistband without conscious decision. The same sequence every time. Watch. Unzip. Wait until {{sub}} was still enough for a clean shot.

{{sub}} turned toward the mirror on the closet door. Glenn's finger found the shutter release. Three frames in quick succession, the motor drive a whisper against his palm. {{poss}} reflection doubled {{obj}}—front and back both visible, the line of {{poss}} spine, the curve beneath {{poss}} arms. He felt himself harden fully against his wrist.

{{sub}} stepped out of view toward the bathroom. The light snapped off a moment later.

Glenn exhaled. His hand stilled on himself, grip loosening. The ritual pause—let {{obj}} settle, let the house go quiet again before reviewing. He lowered the camera carefully, bracing it on his thigh, and listened to the pipes groan through the walls. Water running. The ordinary sounds of someone preparing for bed.

He wrapped his fingers around himself properly, eyes half-closed, the afterimage of {{poss}} body floating against the dark. The mirror shot. The way the light had caught the small of {{poss}} back. His hips shifted forward into his grip—

The bathroom light went off. Footsteps. The bedroom light again.

Glenn opened his eyes. His hand stopped.

{{sub}} was moving through the room faster than usual, not the slow undress he'd memorized but something else—reaching for something on the dresser, turning, crossing to the closet. He lifted the camera on instinct, tracking {{obj}} through the viewfinder. {{sub}} wasn't still enough for clean shots but he fired anyway, four, five frames, wanting to catch whatever had changed.

{{sub}} left the bedroom. Door open. Hall light spilling in.

Glenn lowered the camera. His erection flagged slightly, the urgency interrupted. He waited thirty seconds. A minute. The house stayed lit. Something was wrong with the routine.

He hit the playback button.

The LCD screen glowed bright in the dark, washing his vision blue. The first image loaded—{{user}} at the mirror, the shot he'd taken before. He zoomed in on {{poss}} reflection, the familiar angle, the—

His stomach dropped.

Behind {{poss}} reflected body, in the dark space between the closet door and the wall. A shape. Not shadow—shadow didn't have edges like that, didn't have the suggestion of a head tilted at an angle that necks didn't bend. Not a coat, not a robe, not anything that should be there.

Glenn's thumb jabbed the forward button. Second shot. Same angle. The shape had moved closer to {{poss}} reflection. Third shot. Closer still. Fourth—{{user}} turning toward the dresser, and the shape behind {{obj}} turning too, its tilt following {{poss}} movement.

He scrolled back to the first image and zoomed until the pixels fragmented. The shape didn't resolve into anything recognizable. It simply was—a darkness with intention, positioned inches from {{poss}} body, close enough to touch if it had hands.

The fifth frame. {{user}} walking toward the closet. The shape no longer behind {{obj}} but beside {{obj}}. Matching {{poss}} stride.

Glenn's hands shook. He cycled through the images again, faster, looking for some explanation—a coat hung wrong, a shadow cast by the lamp, anything. The shape persisted. In every frame. Closer each time.

He'd seen it before. In earlier photos. Distant. Backgrounded. A blur he'd dismissed as processing artifacts, a smudge on the negative, a trick of low light. Never this close. Never this with {{obj}}.

The LCD screen dimmed to save power. He jabbed the button to wake it, scrolled again, as if repetition might change what he was seeing. It didn't. The shape remained, and in the final frame—{{user}} walking out of the bedroom—the shape was following. Inches behind. Head still tilted at that wrong angle.

A sound from the house. A door closing somewhere deeper inside.

Glenn stood up too fast. His knee cracked, stiff from crouching. The Canon bounced against his chest, strap catching on his collar. He fumbled it free and pushed through the gap in the hedge, twigs scraping his forearms, and then he was on the sidewalk in front of the house, breathing hard, not sure how he'd gotten there.

The porch light was on. The front window showed the living room, empty.

He was walking toward the door before he understood he'd decided to move. His jeans were still unbuttoned—he felt the gap with each step, the night air against skin that shouldn't be exposed. He couldn't make himself stop to fix it. The shape in the photographs kept reconstituting behind his eyes, that wrong-tilted head, that proximity that felt worse than anything he'd ever done.

His knock was too loud. Too fast. Three sharp raps that sounded like panic.

He waited, fist still raised, and realized he had no idea what he was going to say. Suddenly, only then, did he suddenly rush to button up his jeans.