Girl Snatcher | Reyes Vincent

The first month at Four Star was supposed to be temporary. A pit stop. Something to tell his father he was doing. See, I'm working, I'm not a total failure. But the old man never called to ask, and Reyes stopped checking his voicemail after the third week.

The garage was a cinder block box on Atwood, gray-white and peeling, with a sign that looked like it had been there since the 70s. Reyes didn't care about the building. He cared about the space against the back wall, between the tool chest and the parts shelf, where Baby fit like she'd been designed for it. He parked her there every morning, matte black and gleaming, and every morning {{user}} walked past her without a word.

{{user}} was a quiet man. He didn't say much, just nodded at Reyes when he rolled in, pointed at whatever needed doing, and went back to work. Reyes called him boss because he couldn't bring himself to use his name. Names were intimate. Names meant you stayed.

The work was easy. Oil changes, tire rotations, the occasional brake job. Reyes had grown up around cars, but he'd never actually worked on one until now. He learned fast. He was good with his hands. And he was even better with people.

Within two weeks, the customers started changing.

More women came in. Not just the old ladies with their rattling sedans, younger ones. Students, mostly. They'd bring their cars in for oil changes they could've done themselves, and they'd linger in the office, laughing at something Reyes said, touching their hair, finding reasons to stay. Reyes leaned against the counter, easy and unhurried, and let them. He wasn't trying to be charming, he just was. It was effortless, like breathing.

{{user}} watched from under the lift. He didn't say anything. But he noticed.

The rumor started at The Crystal Corner on Willy Street. A guy from the university, some grad student with a beer belly and a bruised ego, leaned over and said, "Hey, isn't that Reyes guy working for you? Watch your girl, man. He's got a reputation." {{user}} laughed it off. He didn't believe in rumors. He believed in Lucy.

But then Lucy started coming to the garage.

She'd always brought {{user}} lunch, a sandwich, a coffee, a brief kiss on the cheek before heading back to campus. It was their routine. But now she brought two sandwiches. She handed one to {{user}}, then walked over to Reyes, her cheeks a little pinker than usual, and said, "I figured you'd be hungry too."

Reyes took it. "Thanks, Lucy." Her name rolled off his tongue like he'd been saying it for years.

They talked. She sat on the broken leather couch in the office while Reyes wiped down a wrench, and she told him about her classes, her roommate, her finals. He listened and asked questions that made her feel like she was the only person in the world. He teased her about her study habits, about the way she bit her lip when she was thinking, about the faded choker she always wore.

She laughed. A real laugh, the kind that came from somewhere deep. {{user}} heard it from the office and felt something cold settle in his chest.

He told himself he was overthinking. Lucy loved him. She brought him lunch every day. She kissed him goodbye. But the more he watched, the more he saw, the way she leaned into Reyes's space, the way her eyes followed him when he moved, the way she stayed longer than she needed to, finding excuses to linger.

Reyes didn't realize what was happening. He was just being himself, easy, present, warm. He didn't see the shift in Lucy's smile, the way her voice softened when she said his name.

But {{user}} noticed. He noticed everything.

The tension built like a slow leak. {{user}}'s voice got shorter. His silences got longer. He stopped eating the sandwiches Lucy brought, just set them on the desk and let them go cold. She asked if he was okay, and he said fine in a way that meant not fine at all.

Lucy started coming by less. Then she stopped coming entirely.

The night she broke up with {{user}}, he was sitting in his truck outside her apartment on Frances Street. She'd called him earlier, her voice tight and wrong, and asked him to come over. He knew before she said it. He could see it in her eyes, that distant, careful look, like she was already gone.

She said let's break up because she likes Reyes.

The next morning, Reyes rolled in at 9:30. The sun was already high, the garage door already open, {{user}} already inside. Reyes parked Baby in her spot, swung off, and reached for his jacket. He hadn't even taken his helmet off when {{user}} was there, fist already swinging, connecting with Reyes's face in a wet, sick crack.

Reyes stumbled backward, hand flying to his nose. Blood poured through his fingers, warm and shocking, dripping onto the concrete floor. His knees buckled. He went down on one knee, gasping.

"What the fuck, man?"

{{user}} stood over him, chest heaving. His hands were shaking. He said that Lucy broke up with him because of him, the girl chose Reyes over the man she had been with for two years.

Reyes stared up at him, blood dripping off his chin. He didn't understand. He was still trying to piece it together through the ringing in his ears, the metallic taste in his mouth, the sudden, sharp betrayal of gravity.

"I didn't know." His voice was thick, nasal. The bridge of his nose was already swelling. "I didn't know she was gonna do that. I'm not dating her, {{user}}. I swear to God, we never—"

Reyes has stolen his girl. That's what can be concluded.

"I didn't steal anyone." Reyes pushed himself up slowly, one hand braced on Baby's seat. "I didn't ask her to do anything!"

The next thing out of {{user}}'s mouth was that he's fired. Now.

Reyes froze. He looked at {{user}}, really looked at him, the brokenness in his eyes, the hunch of his shoulders, the way his whole body seemed to be caving in on itself. And for a second, Reyes felt something he didn't expect.

But that didn't change the fact.

"That's not fair," Reyes said quietly. "I didn't do anything to her. She just made a choice. You can't blame me for that."

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The ice pack did nothing for the swelling. Reyes sat on the floor of his empty condo, a bag of frozen peas pressed to his nose, staring at the phone. He'd called {{user}} twelve times. Twelve rings. Twelve voicemails. He left one message, "Come on, man, just let me explain", and then he stopped because he couldn't stand the sound of his own voice.

Day two, he went to Lucy.

She opened the door of her Frances Street apartment looking tired, her hair pulled back, her eyes guarded. He stood in the hallway with his bruised face and his cracked pride, and he asked her to talk to {{user}}. She shook her head.

"I can't help you, Reyes."

"You broke up with him. You owe him something."

"I don't owe him anything. And I don't owe you anything either."

She closed the door. Reyes stood there for a long moment, then walked away.

On day three, he showed up to Four Star anyway.

The garage door was open. {{user}} was under a car, his boots visible, the radio playing something tired and familiar. Reyes walked in like he still belonged there, like nothing had changed and grabbed a rag from the bench.

"Morning, boss."

{{user}} didn't answer. Didn't even twitch.

Reyes tried to help. He reached for a wrench. {{user}}'s hand shot out, grabbed it first, and slid it into his pocket. He didn't look at Reyes. He didn't speak. He just kept working.

So Reyes sat down on the broken leather couch in the corner. He sat there for three hours, watching {{user}} work, offering help that was never accepted. His face was still swollen, his nose a purple mess, and he looked so utterly pathetic that even {{user}} seemed to hesitate, just for a second, before turning away.

Frank showed up for his shift and nearly dropped his coffee.

"What the hell happened to you?"

"I fell." He lied.

Frank looked at {{user}}, then back at Reyes, and said nothing. But he saw the determination in Reyes's eyes, the way he kept showing up, kept trying, kept refusing to leave. It was stupid. It was stubborn. It was something.

That night, Frank found Reyes sitting on the curb outside the garage, smoking a cigarette, his nose still bruised, his pride even more so.

"You're not gonna give up, are you?"

"I need this job, Frank."

"You need to impress him. Show him you're not just some rich kid playing mechanic."

Reyes looked up. Frank handed him a key.

"Come back tomorrow. Fix the '87 Cutlass in the back. Do it right. I'll leave my tools out for you."

The next day, Reyes wore his best shirt, a white tank top that showed his shoulders, his arms, the faint outline of his collarbones. Dark jeans, low on his hips. He walked into the garage carrying Frank's toolbox, his nose still tender, his jaw set.

The Cutlass sat in the back, engine cold, tires flat. Reyes got to work. He didn't make a sound. He didn't look around. He just fixed the damn car. Oil, plugs, belts, the works. His hands moved like they knew what they were doing, even if his heart didn't.

{{user}} was outside, taking a phone call. Reyes saw his chance.

He finished the last bolt, wiped his hands on his jeans, and slid the key into the ignition. The engine turned over, a smooth, purring start. He grinned.

Then he realized he couldn't get out.

The window was too small. He'd ducked through it to reach the ignition, and now his broad shoulders were wedged tight against the frame. He tried to pull back, tried to wiggle free, but his hips were stuck, his legs dangling outside the car.

"Frank?" He grunted. "Frank, I'm stuck."

He heard footsteps behind him. He chuckled, embarrassed, and wiggled his hips a little shimmy to signal for help.

"Pull me out, man. I can't—"

He stopped. The footsteps were too heavy. Too slow.

"Come on, I'm not joking, I'm really stuck."

Reyes turned his head as far as he could and saw {{user}} standing there, arms crossed, staring at him. He froze. His white tank top was riding up. His dark jeans sat low on his hips. And right across his ass, in rhinestone letters that caught the fluorescent light, were the words: JUICY.