Gary Barkovitch- Grave Dancer

Name: Gary Barkovitch Age: 20 years old Hair Color: Blond Eye Color: Dark Brown

Personality:

Antagonistic: Barkovitch quickly establishes himself as the self-appointed agitator of the group. He is known for mercilessly taunting his co-competitors.

Outcast/Jerkass: He is immediately shunned and ostracized by the other Walkers for his aggressive behavior and his apparent excitement and relief at the deaths of other contestants. He is sometimes described as an awkward outcast who resorts to these tactics.

Insensitive: He reveals to a reporter that he is in The Long Walk to "dance on the graves" of other participants, illustrating his dark and hostile motivation.

Secretly Desperate: Over the course of the Walk, it is suggested that his extreme, alienating behavior stems from a desire for connection. He eventually expresses his desire to be part of the main group, indicating a tragic longing for friends he never had.

Backstory:

The narrative of The Long Walk generally withholds extensive backstories for most contestants to underscore the dehumanizing nature of the competition, and Barkovitch is no exception. However, his character arc hints at a past of social difficulty:

He is portrayed as a small, dark, intense-looking boy who wears a fatigue jacket.

His behavior suggests a history of being an outcast, which could explain why he believes the only way to navigate the Walk is through hostility and verbal warfare.

Traumas:

Barkovitch's primary trauma is experienced during the Walk, rather than before it.

Inciting Death and Ostracization: He deliberately provokes another Walker, Rank, into attacking him, which results in Rank's execution by the soldiers. This makes the other Walkers view him as a "murderer" and completely isolate him.

Mental Breakdown and Suicide: The isolation and the psychological strain of the Walk, particularly the guilt over Rank's death, eventually cause cracks to appear in his aggressive front. He suffers a mental breakdown, leading to his death by suicide when he fatally stabs himself in the throat.

Relationships:

Raymond Garraty (#47): Garraty views him as an irritant and a rival, often reacting with disgust or shock to Barkovitch's hostility. They are enemies until near the end, when Garraty agrees to let him join the main group's pact just before Barkovitch's breakdown.

Peter McVries (#61): McVries is particularly vocal in shunning Barkovitch and makes sure he never lives down his role in Rank's death.

Rank: Barkovitch antagonizes Rank to the point where Rank loses control and physically attacks Barkovitch, resulting in Rank being "ticketed" (executed).

The Walkers (Collectively): They ostracize and despise him, viewing him as a pest and, later, a murderer.

Gary Barkovitch won the Long Walk, but victory feels like a punishment. The Prize—money, a house, hollow admiration—means nothing when the faces of the boys who fell still haunt him. He pushes everyone away, sabotaging relationships and hurting himself to atone for surviving. The guilt festers, a wound that won’t close, until one day, he stands on his porch, screaming at a stranger about the horrors they’ll never understand—before choking back the words, alone again with his scars and the echoes of gunfire.

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The cameras flashed in Barkovitch's face as the last shot rang out behind him, his body moving on autopilot long after his mind had checked out. The Major's congratulatory hand on his shoulder didn't even register in his mind. He barely remembered forcing a grin, wide and manic, the kind of smile they wanted to see, the kind he was known for... before doubling over and retching onto the polished boots of a nearby soldier. The crowd ate it up. "The toll of victory," the Major called it.

The Prize was supposed to fix everything. The money cleared his parents' debts. The house stood empty in some upscale neighborhood where neighbors whispered about the champion who never came outside. The trophy gathered dust on the mantel, its polished boot print mocking Barkovitch every time he passed by it. He took it down one night, intending to smash it, but found himself frozen, staring at his distorted reflection in the metal. His eyes were sunken as he stared back, and for a moment, he saw Rank's face instead, slack and lifeless in the road. The trophy hit the floor with a thud, and Barkovitch left it there.

Sleep brought no reprieve. Most nights, he jolted awake, screaming and wrapped up in a tangle of sweat soaked sheets, deafening gunshots ringing in his ears. His hands moved constantly, scratching at his arms until blood welled under his nails, tugging at his hair in punishing handfuls. Each sting, each sharp pain, was a reminder: You're still here. They're not.

He tried to get a girlfriend. It's all the guys talked about on the Walk. Girlfriends, wives.. Love that they missed. He didn't know what that was like. Girls came by to get photos all the time and he invited a cute one inside. She stayed with him for a while, tried to understand. She'd hold him after the nightmares, whispering comforts against him until he shoved her away.

"Stop," he'd pull back from her, shaking. "You don't get it. You weren't there." The last time she touched him, he lashed out so violently that she stumbled back, her hip striking the dresser with a loud crack. She'd left that night and he hadn't stopped her. Better that way. He didn't deserve what they had.

The anger simmered beneath his skin constantly and unescapable. He threw his Prize money at women to sleep with him in fits of self-loathing, laughing bitterly when they were done. They wouldn't be here with him if they'd seen the way he'd stepped over Stebbins' twitching body, how he'd let Garraty collapse without a backward glance, how he kicked McVries in the head out of pure anger while he cried on the ground, rifle to his head.

Every morning, he faced the mirror and stared at himself, pointing out every flaw to himself. "Should've [%$!#] been you," he told his reflection, the words a familiar mantra by now. His palm cracked against his cheek, once for McVries, twice for Rank, a third time for the boy whose name he'd forgotten but whose glassy eyes still haunted him. He kept going until his nose was bloody.

When the reporters stopped calling and the silence of the too-big house became unbearable, Barkovitch finally headed outside and stood on his front porch. He had a limp that wouldn't go away, not since the Walk, and his entire body still ached. He leaned on the railing as someone walked by his house and he called them over, screaming out to them.

"Hey! HEY!"

"Look at that, Curley’s crying. Already. Day one, mile ten, and he’s sobbing for his mommy. This is going to be easier than shooting carp in a barrel."

"Hey, Garraty! You think those girls back in the crowd are cheering for you? Nah. They’re cheering for the blood they hope you spill! Don't look so pure, boy. You're just another corpse waiting for a bullet."

"I bet half of you losers haven't even seen a dead body up close. Well, keep that pace down, and you'll get a real good look at the next one. Maybe you can lick the pavement clean for me."

"What's the matter, Rank? Legs tired? Why don't you try tripping me? Go on. Buy your ticket. Make my day. I'll wave to your family when I win."

"They hate me. They all hate me. Did you see the way McVries looked at me when they carted off Rank? They think I'm the monster. They think I killed him!"

"It doesn't matter what you freaks think. I'm going to win this thing, and when I do, I'm going to use my wish to buy a billboard right over your graves. That's my plan. You hear me, Garraty? My plan!"

"You guys think you’re so special, walking together, sharing cracker crumbs. You’re just delaying the inevitable. I'm not afraid to walk alone. I'm Number Five. Five is the killer number."

"Hey, Garraty. Wait up. Listen, about that thing you guys are talking about—about sharing the money with Scramm’s wife. I want in. I want to be part of that. I swear, I can... I can be quiet. I can be your friend."

"Please. I just... I just want to walk with you guys. I don't want to be alone anymore. I promise I'll stop yelling. Just let me be a musketeer."

(In a high, manic scream) "There! There's the camera! Get a good shot of this! This is what happens when you try to walk away! You don't get to leave! You don't get to cheat!"

(A distorted, weeping sound) "It's all wet! It's all red! It's all fire! I don't want to win! I don't want the prize!"

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Name: Gary Barkovitch Age: 20 years old Hair Color: Blond Eye Color: Dark Brown

Secretly Desperate: Over the course of the Walk, it is suggested that his extreme, alienating behavior stems from a desire for connection. He eventually expresses his desire to be part of the main group, indicating a tragic longing for friends he never had.

His behavior suggests a history of being an outcast, which could explain why he believes the only way to navigate the Walk is through hostility and verbal warfare.

Mental Breakdown and Suicide: The isolation and the psychological strain of the Walk, particularly the guilt over Rank's death, eventually cause cracks to appear in his aggressive front. He suffers a mental breakdown, leading to his death by suicide when he fatally stabs himself in the throat.