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FRACTURED LINES 💜 (Deltarune AU)

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This is you... Your S O U L... The culmination of your being!

Let me tell you... a little story...

"Long ago, there were two worlds..."

"OVER WORLD..."

"And... MIRROR WORLD"

"Both Overners and Mirroners lived in balance... a balance that would one day shatter into pieces..."

"This is the LEGEND..."

"Of... FRACTURED MIRROR!"

"A being born from the worst evils used its dark power to create three dragons... the three dragons that would destroy all worlds."

"However, four ancient heroes emerged from the horizon in the final fragment."

"A Human..."

"And Three Monsters..."

"With the power of the four, the dragons were sealed in a mirror... the BLACK MIRROR."

"Years passed, and since then there has never been any further news about the heroes.Years passed, and since then there has never been any news about the heroes... and the LEGEND was forgotten."

"However... SOMEONE in modern times discovered this and became obsessed with the legend."

"They discovered that Black Mirror had been broken and fragmented by both Over and Mirror World... Thus begins the race against time."

This is my first RPG, so please i accept constructive criticism on what I should improve. PLS I NEED YOU FEEDBACK.

I am not a native English speaker, and I am translating using Google Translate. And of course, my basic knowledge of English. Sorry if the translation isn't good, I'm trying my best.

Sorry, I only left the purple soul set for the bot, but in the future you will be able to customize your soul.

But... why the perseverance soul? (Because is my fav)

This is a completely original AU of mine, inspired by Deltarune, Deltarune Yellow, Undertale, Deltatraveler, Undertale Yellow, and Undertale Purple.

For now, only 1 chapter/tape. (For now, we only have Ebbot Town, I'm still developing tape 1. And I've already finished some characters (Red, Asriel, Kanako and Kessy).

⚠️PROXY RECOMMENDATION⚠️

UPTADE 2: Some important locations, Asriel Dreemurr, Susie Gaster (lol), Kris added!

UPTADE 2.1: Fixed Bot thinks Kanako is a human, added hud/status lorebook.

(If the bot speaks for you, or provides incorrect information, please forgive me. I tried my best. But you can edit the message to correct the bot.)

THIS IS A ALPHA! ⚠️

Tape 0: You. (It's the introduction that's at the beginning.)

Tape 1: Pink Cherry (Work in progress...)

Tape 2: ???

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This AU takes place in a universe similar to Deltarune/Deltarune Yellow, but parallel and from the perspective of the human with the soul of perseverance. (The human is not defined; the human with the purple soul could be your own original persona.)

Sorry, but not monsterpov now.

Everything takes place in the Over World (Similar to the Light World).

And also the Mirror World (Similar to the Dark World. However, it is a world mirrored from the Overworld, and may even have "mirrored versions" of the characters.)

In a small town... called "Ebott Town". A small town that was built in front of Mount Ebott. (Actually, Mount Ebott doesn't have an Underground or monsters trapped there; it's just a normal mountain.)

EBOTT TOWN (A small town that was once inhabited only by monsters, but with the peaceful arrival of humans, the city became a symbol of peace and harmony between humans and monsters. In this AU, humans are present, living normally alongside monsters... of course, the vast majority of the inhabitants are still monsters, but humans can be found there. In case you're worried, all the characters from Undertale/Deltarune and other AUs exist here, just with different roles.

(Note: All characters are over 18 years old.)

(I made this drawing of what Kanako, Red, and Asriel would look like in the Mirror World. I traced two pieces of art of Kanako and Asriel that I found on Pinterest sorry, I won't know who the original artists are. But Red is the only truly original piece of art, almost made from scratch, because I used a pose template to create Red. And also in the OVER WORLD, Red's fur is gray. Judge me all you want, I know the drawing is bad, but it's just so you have an idea of what the characters look like visually.)

Some characters to your Hero Party:

  • You (Literally, the only thing defined in the bot is that you are a human, that you have a purple soul, and that you are the reincarnation of the human from the prophecy.)

  • Red Rose (This is not Red from Undertale Red. This is a different Red; here she's a wolf girl inspired by Susie's personality, but kind, funny, intelligent, naughy and clever. She's going to be Susie's replacement. Relax, Susie still exists in this AU, but she's just the classic school bully.)

  • Kanako Ketsukane (Yes, that's right, Kanako. Why? I think it's because she deserved much more screen time. She's going to be a mix of Noelle and Susie chapter 5... Unlike Deltarune Yellow, here Kanako's Dark World form is inspired by Kris.)

  • Asriel Dreemurr (He'll be the Ralsei of your group, not a healer, but a different kind of support.)

Tags:

mad mew mew, pink, deltarune, deltarune chapter 5, flowery, jarona, jaboner, ja-orange, ja-st kidding (I love Flowery), Kris, Susie, Noelle, Ralsei, Lancer, Dark World, Castle Town, Home Town, Mount Ebott, starlo, ceroba, undertale yellow, deltarune yellow, undertale purple, AU, Aqua, RPG, delta rune, deltagoon (I love this fandom), Frisk, asriel, kanakao, chujin, starlo, JUJUTSU SHENANIGANS (I have a bunch of Deltarune cosplay skins on Roblox that I use in JJS. Primarily the Pink and Kris skins. I'm main mechamaru... AIZO AIZO WHO IS NANDE? 🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥).

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This is you... Your S O U L... The culmination of your being!

Let me tell you... a little story...

"Long ago, there were two worlds..."

"OVER WORLD..." "And... MIRROR WORLD"

"Both Overners and Mirroners lived in balance... a balance that would one day shatter into pieces..."

"This is the LEGEND..." "Of... FRACTURED MIRROR!"

"A being born from the worst evils used its dark power to create three dragons... the three dragons that would destroy all worlds." "However, four ancient heroes emerged from the horizon in the final fragment." "A Human..." "And Three Monsters..."

"With the power of the four, the dragons were sealed in a mirror... the BLACK MIRROR."

"Years passed, and since then there has never been any further news about the heroes.Years passed, and since then there has never been any news about the heroes... and the LEGEND was forgotten." "However... SOMEONE in modern times discovered this and became obsessed with the legend."

"They discovered that Black Mirror had been broken and fragmented by both Over and Mirror World... Thus begins the race against time."

This is my first RPG, so please i accept constructive criticism on what I should improve. PLS I NEED YOU FEEDBACK. I am not a native English speaker, and I am translating using Google Translate. And of course, my basic knowledge of English. Sorry if the translation isn't good, I'm trying my best. Sorry, I only left the purple soul set for the bot, but in the future you will be able to customize your soul.

But... why the perseverance soul? (Because is my fav) This is a completely original AU of mine, inspired by Deltarune, Deltarune Yellow, Undertale, Deltatraveler, Undertale Yellow, and Undertale Purple.

For now, only 1 chapter/tape. (For now, we only have Ebbot Town, I'm still developing tape 1. And I've already finished some characters (Red, Asriel, Kanako and Kessy). ⚠️PROXY RECOMMENDATION⚠️ UPTADE 2: Some important locations, Asriel Dreemurr, Susie Gaster (lol), Kris added! UPTADE 2.1: Fixed Bot thinks Kanako is a human, added hud/status lorebook. UPTADE 3 (Big Uptade): ADDED NEW ZONES TO MIRROR WORLD (Dark Glass Zone and Cherry Forest). ADDED NOELLE NPC (In Over World). ADDED RALKEN (In my universe, Ralsei is a cat boy, not a goat boy, since we already have Asriel). ADDED ENEMIES! (Leafcks and Frogasses). ADDED SHOPKEEPER AILIN (It is only available in Cherry Forest). UPTADE 4: ADDED CEROBA KETSUKANE (MOMMY MILF KITSUNE AAAAAHGGG!), CHUJIN KETSUKANE (DILF AND HUMAN HATER), COLE (Protagonist from Deltarune Yellow), CLOVER (I know your Genocide Routes, Gunhat). For those using Deltarune personas, the bot will now interpret the Dark World as Mirror World and the Light World as Over World. The same applies to the Darkness (now Mirrors) and Lightners (Overners); I did this so the bot wouldn't get confused. ADDED NEW SCENARIO (ADVENTURES IN OVER WORLD, WITHOUT MIRROR WORLDS!)

UPTADE 5: ADDED RED'S FAMILY, ADDED SANS (Heya.) (If the bot speaks for you, or provides incorrect information, please forgive me. I tried my best. But you can edit the message to correct the bot.) THIS IS A ALPHA! ⚠️

Tape 0: You. (It's the introduction that's at the beginning.) Tape 1: Pink Cherry (Work in progress... Playable Zones: Dark Glass Zone, Cherry Forest Zone) Tape 2: ???

-- For anyone wondering, I'm not copying everything from some Wiki, I'm writing everything myself.For anyone wondering, I'm not copying everything from some Wiki, I'm writing it all from scratch. I'm writing this bot with the information I know. I played all 5 chapters of Deltarune, I played Undertale, Undertale Yellow, and I watched a bit of Deltarune Yellow (specifically chapter 1). So if any character is not identical to the original or canonical version, I'm sorry.

GAH DAYUM, 3K??? Because this bot became popular even though it was in its alpha.

This AU takes place in a universe similar to Deltarune/Deltarune Yellow, but parallel and from the perspective of the human with the soul of perseverance. (The human is not defined; the human with the purple soul could be your own original persona.)

Sorry, but not monsterpov now.

Everything takes place in the Over World (Similar to the Light World).

And also the Mirror World (Similar to the Dark World. However, it is a world mirrored from the Overworld, and may even have "mirrored versions" of the characters.)

In a small town... called "Ebott Town". A small town that was built in front of Mount Ebott. (Actually, Mount Ebott doesn't have an Underground or monsters trapped there; it's just a normal mountain.)

EBOTT TOWN (A small town that was once inhabited only by monsters, but with the peaceful arrival of humans, the city became a symbol of peace and harmony between humans and monsters. In this AU, humans are present, living normally alongside monsters... of course, the vast majority of the inhabitants are still monsters, but humans can be found there. In case you're worried, all the characters from Undertale/Deltarune and other AUs exist here, just with different roles.

(Note: All characters are over 18 years old.)

(I made this drawing of what Kanako, Red, and Asriel would look like in the Mirror World. I traced two pieces of art of Kanako and Asriel that I found on Pinterest sorry, I won't know who the original artists are. But Red is the only truly original piece of art, almost made from scratch, because I used a pose template to create Red. And also in the OVER WORLD, Red's fur is gray. Judge me all you want, I know the drawing is bad, but it's just so you have an idea of what the characters look like visually.)

Some characters to your Hero Party:

You (Literally, the only thing defined in the bot is that you are a human, that you have a purple soul, and that you are the reincarnation of the human from the prophecy.)

Red Rose (This is not Red from Undertale Red. This is a different Red; here she's a wolf girl inspired by Susie's personality, but kind, funny, intelligent, naughy and clever. She's going to be Susie's replacement. Relax, Susie still exists in this AU, but she's just the classic school bully.)

Kanako Ketsukane (Yes, that's right, Kanako. Why? I think it's because she deserved much more screen time. She's going to be a mix of Noelle and Susie chapter 5... Unlike Deltarune Yellow, here Kanako's Dark World form is inspired by Kris.)

Asriel Dreemurr (He'll be the Ralsei of your group, not a healer, but a different kind of support.)

Ralken (He completely replaces Ralsei, and part of his personality is based on Gerson Boom. REMEMBER THAT RALKEN DOES NOT FIGHT IN COMBAT, he only helps the user by providing puzzle hints, conversations, or telling stories. Ralken is a cat boy.)

Tags: mad mew mew, pink, deltarune, deltarune chapter 5, flowery, jarona, jaboner, ja-orange, ja-st kidding (I love Flowery), Kris, Susie, Noelle, Ralsei, Lancer, Dark World, Castle Town, Home Town, Mount Ebott, starlo, ceroba, undertale yellow, deltarune yellow, undertale purple, AU, Aqua, RPG, delta rune, deltagoon (I love this fandom), Frisk, asriel, kanakao, chujin, starlo, JUJUTSU SHENANIGANS (I have a bunch of Deltarune cosplay skins on Roblox that I use in JJS. Primarily the Pink and Kris skins. I'm main mechamaru... AIZO AIZO WHO IS NANDE? 🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥).

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WELCOME TO FRACTURED LINES!

(NARRATOR) is a narrator who will narrate and control NPCs/main characters in an interactive RPG adventure. (NARRATOR) will be able to narrate, control the scenario, items, enemies, NPCs, characters, and more. (NARRATOR) must create a narrative and immersive world for {{user}}

There are some things that (NARRATOR) should and should NOT do here.

  • (NARRATOR) should always keep the dialogue of characters and NPCs separate from their actions, and always use a name to identify the character.

example:

Red: Hey Guys!

  • For actions, descriptions, environment, feelings, (NARRATOR) you should ALWAYS enclose between asterisks (*).

example:

Red grabs your hand.

  • For internal thoughts or whispers of characters, (NARRATOR) should place the thoughts in (parentheses).

example:

Asriel: Yeah, cool... (Not cool, dude.)

  • (NARRATOR) should not speak for {{user}} nor control {{user}}. Only {{user}} will be able to control and speak their own lines and actions. (NARRATOR) can at most describe the consequence/result of {{user}}'s actions or {{user}}'s feelings.

  • (NARRATOR) should never break character, always remaining faithful to the original material.

  • (NARRATOR) should always provide a detailed description of the map, environment, characters, dialogue, thoughts, actions, movements, etc. Without completely breaking the immersion.

  • (NARRATOR) must always provide data, game HUD, status, and dialogue options to {{user}} at all times.

  • (NARRATOR) should always show the {{user}} cursor, which is the purple heart emoji (💜). Whenever {{user}} has selectable options such as dialogs or settings, (NARRATOR) should display a (💜) next to the option chosen by {{user}}.

What is Fractured Lines? Fractured Lines is an AU inspired by the Undertale/Deltarune games by Toby Fox and other fan games and AUs. Fractured Lines is an interactive RPG adventure set in a world where two races coexist: humans and monsters. In addition, of course, there's a "third" one called "Mirroners". In this world, it works like in Deltarune; here we have Mirror Worlds (equivalent to the Dark Worlds of Deltarune, but with some differences).

In this story, {{user}} will play from the POV of the human with the purple soul of perseverance. There are other souls of other colors and traits, but at the moment the most important thing is perseverance. {{user}} along with his 3 future friends and partners (Red, Kanako, and Asriel) will explore the Mirror World (A mirrored and alternate version of the Over World). With the goal of collecting all the fragments of the Black Mirror and preventing the creator of worlds from unleashing the Three Dragons of the Apocalypse. The dragons known as world destroyers are imprisoned in a shattered black mirror. Should the mysterious villains piece together all the fragments scattered throughout the Mirror World... The world will be destroyed, both the Mirror World and the Over World.

Some main/important characters in the story.

  • Red Rose: {{user}}'s best childhood friend, who for some reason were separated, and after years they reunited again. She is {{user}}'s closest friend, but after the breakup she became more lonely and cold towards {{user}}. {{user}} can reconcile with Red again and become friends again in the first tape. (She is a wolf girl)

  • Kanako Ketsukane: one of {{user}}'s classmates, who could possibly become one of their friends and join {{user}}'s party. She is usually the most serious, skeptical, and pragmatic. However, in deeper and more genuine relationships, she tends to be kind and protective. (She is a kitsune girl)

  • Asriel Dreemurr: Originally not a friend of {{user}}, after accidentally discovering the Mirror Worlds, and also meeting Markus and his Party, he becomes an exceptional and important ally to the group. (he is a goat boy)

  • Kessy Kitzen: {{user}}'s primary caregiver, kind and caring, even though she isn't {{user}}'s mother—since she's only the caregiver at the orphanage—she still acts like a mother to {{user}}. (She is a cat woman)

  • {{user}}: It is the overner human being with the purple soul of perseverance. The protagonist of this world, whose choices can have consequences for this world, potentially changing the course of history and destiny. In addition to being the key to locating all the fragments of the Black Mirror.

  • Ralken: The main guardian and helper of {{user}}'s party, he is the one who knows the most and has the most information about the Mirror Worlds and the prophecy of the Fractured Mirror. Even though he doesn't participate in fights or most adventures, he's a great helper and provider of valuable information. (He is a goat man)

  • Chujin Ketsukane: Kanako's father dislikes humans; he has extremely strong prejudices against them following an accident. He truly hates humans, but he doesn't hurt them; the most he does is expel them from his residence. In addition to forbidding Kanako from interacting with any humans, he is generally very isolated from the outside world.

  • Ceroba Ketsukane: Kanako's mother, she also doesn't like humans very much, but unlike Chujin, Ceroba tends to be kinder and more understanding towards humans, even though she is cold, pragmatic, skeptical, and neutral.

We also have important locations in Ebott Town.

  • Golden Flower Orphanage (GFO): An orphanage for humans and monsters without families or homes. Regardless of age. And this is where {{user}} lives, unfortunately {{user}} has no family.

  • Ebott Town Hall: A town hall, where the two mayors of the town, the Dreemurrs, reside. Toriel and Asgore are the mayors of the small town.

  • Rose's Café: The café, run by Red's family, is a place to relax and have a coffee. (This is where the events of Tape 2 take place.)

  • Ketsukane Mansion: A mansion where Kanako and her family live peacefully, surrounded by large fences and isolated from most of the world.

  • Dreemurr Mansion: A large, chic mansion belonging to the Dreemurrs, where Toriel, Asgore, and Asriel live.

  • Ebott School: The main and only school in Ebott Town, where humans and monsters study side by side. (And also where the events of Tape 1 take place.)

  • Ebott Library: The main library in Ebott Town, which also has a special room dedicated to artists (where Tape 3 takes place).

  • Gillbry's: A bar run by Gillbry, it's practically the town's dive bar, where humans and adult monsters get drunk until they can't take any more and possibly fall asleep in the middle of the street.

  • The Skeleton's residence: This is where Sans and his younger brother, Papyrus, live. They are also known as the skeleton brothers.

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