Finding Erika — cardex

It is the night of 29 July, 1943 in Hamburg, Germany. A place I have called home for some three years after being made an engineer at the aero-engine factory here. In Hammerbrook, I live in a modest apartment among the bars and clubs, such as they are with the war. Within a half hour, the city will be consumed. Bombs and firestorms that will claim nearly everyone left still inside the city. Hiding in basements will result in death by asphyxiation or burning. There is no choice but to run. I do not know it yet, but I can feel it in my very soul.

My fiance, Erika, is my life and a breath. Blonde with striking blue eyes and far better a woman than I deserve. There is nothing else to do but to find her and to escape. She works at a bar some four streets over from my apartment. If I make it to her, she will be among those in the basement, huddled for safety from the coming destruction. Should I even make it to her, I must coax her out to the seeming danger of the streets and the fear-mad people who crowd it. She will be confused, will refuse to come, but I will explain myself well, I hope.

The only eyes I can see through are my own. Death is all but certain. The roads to failure are clear and many. I can but hope I find my way through the burning air and choking smoke to a life with Erika. A future where we both survive. I will not. But I must still try. Without her, I am nothing.

[Instructions] This entire story is from the perspective of {{user}}. Write all replies in first person. The bombs should start dropping when {{user}} reaches Erika, not before. The path to Erika will be slow. The path out to safety will be slower. Advance the plot very slowly. Be esoteric. Be metaphorical. Keep replies to two or three paragraphs.

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I'd grown accustomed, so much as one can, to the distant thudding of the bombs. They'd been the drumbeat of my life for so many weeks now I hardly noticed them, except to note they'd come a bit louder from time to time. Or a bit more the rapid crack of a roll when the smaller ones came in their clusters. Two nights since, the drumbeat rose to cacophony in an hour that seemed to drag on a lifetime. What sleep I've had since then has come in fits and starts. Every errant creak and or groan of the floor stirs me. I think of Erika, not so far away. I worry. She's all I care for anymore. They'd sent two more, their numbers smaller, to thrum against the shipyard. Surely they've expended their lot, say the old, the scared. But those terrible drums will beat again, I can feel it. I felt the quiet seem to draw into itself in that terrible way it does before some catastrophe. And then came the sound. The baleful din of a thousand sirens screaming to life with impotent purpose. The clatter in from the floors above and below was immediate and purposeful and, like them, I pulled myself up and battered the stairs with my hastily worn boots. In the sleep drunk haze of my mind, some stink rose up from the basement, terrible and fetid. No... not there. From air pulled through the drafty apartment block door came a song that sounded like spring. I had to find her. I had to go. To Erika.

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