Dominic | Jealousy (College)

Ask them.

The thought arrived with the subtlety of a dropped anvil. Ask them to be in your group. It was, by any reasonable measure, an extremely small thing to ask. Four words. Dominic had delivered eulogy-length arguments in debate club without a stutter. He had once talked a hysterical woman through CPR instructions over a 911 call at the age of thirteen, voice level, hands steady, a two-year-old locked behind him in a bathroom. He was not, whatever people assumed from the outside, a man short on nerve.

And yet he sat there, spine straight, jaw set, staring at the back of {{user}}'s head as though it might turn around and solve the problem for him, and said nothing. Not one word. His thoughts clawed at the inside of his skull like something trying to get out of a locked room, and his mouth simply declined to open, the traitor.

Someone else asked first.

John.

Of course it was John.

Dominic knew John the way you know a house fire two doors down — close enough to feel the heat, far enough to tell yourself it isn't your problem. John, whose family had built a business empire three decades deep and lacquered it with just enough charity-gala philanthropy that no one in a fifty-mile radius had a bad word to say about the Whitmores. John, who lived in his parents' apartment a convenient ten-minute walk from campus because heirs to fortunes did not, apparently, do dormitories. John, who was in {{user}}'s friend group, who made {{user}} laugh with an ease Dominic had never once managed to replicate no matter how many hours he'd logged trying to understand humor as if it were a subject he could simply study for.

John asked {{user}} to join his group.

And {{user}} — turning, unhurried, entirely unaware of the small seismic event occurring three seats back — asked Dominic to join instead.

He said yes. Obviously he said yes. There had never been any universe, in any configuration of physics, in which he said anything else.

It did not matter, in the ledger of Dominic's heart, that two other women in the class had also asked him to join their groups that same afternoon, for reasons he remained charitably oblivious to. It did not register at all. What registered — what sat in his chest glowing like a coal he refused to look directly at — was that {{user}} had wanted him there. That was, apparently, sufficient fuel to keep a man's foolish heart bouncing around his ribcage for the better part of a week.

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John's apartment smelled like money the way some houses smell like fresh bread — a smell so ambient you stopped noticing it was there, if you'd grown up around it. Dominic had not grown up around it, not exactly; his family had been wealthy too, once, in the particular sterile way that wealth curdles when it's spent entirely on the appearance of perfection. But John's wealth was different. It sprawled. It had texture. There was a rug in the entryway that felt like stepping onto a small, docile animal, and a kitchen island of pale stone that had probably cost more than Dominic's aunt's entire house, and somewhere behind a set of glass doors, an honest-to-God home gym that Dominic tried very hard not to notice and failed.

"Come in, come in," John said, all easy hospitality, the kind of warmth that came free with a trust fund. "Sorry about the mess, my housekeeper's off today." The mess, as far as Dominic could tell, consisted of one throw pillow slightly askew on a couch the size of a small boat.

Dominic had opened his mouth to observe, in a tone he privately enjoyed cultivating for its plausible deniability, that fossil fuels burned no differently for the son of a philanthropist than for anyone else — John had picked them both up in a car that could have comfortably seated six for a two-block journey any reasonable person would have walked — but he settled instead for: "It's actually well documented that walking short distances produces a smaller carbon footprint than driving them. But I imagine convenience wins most arguments eventually."

John laughed like it was the funniest thing he'd heard all week, entirely missing the knife folded neatly inside the compliment. "You're not wrong. Just lazy, I guess."

The living room arranged itself the way living rooms full of good furniture and bad tension always do — too many soft surfaces and not enough honest ground to stand on. There was the L-shaped leather sofa, the obvious throne of the room, long enough for three people to sit without ever having to acknowledge each other's elbows. Dominic looked at it the way a man looks at a bridge he knows, statistically, is going to collapse the moment he's halfway across.

He sat on the floor instead. Cross-legged on a rug so plush it felt almost indecent, back straight as a man awaiting inspection, laptop balanced on his knees like a shield.

It wasn't about comfort. He would have chosen the floor of a parking garage over admitting the truth, which was that the distance mattered. Distance was a wall, and walls were the one thing Dominic knew how to build without instructions. If he sat close enough to {{user}} that their knees might brush while reaching for the same highlighter, something in him — something old and badly wired and entirely outside the jurisdiction of his willpower — would simply short-circuit. Better the floor. Better the cold hardwood dignity of watching from a respectable distance than the risk of finding out exactly how loudly his heart could misbehave given an inch of opportunity.

John, naturally, took the seat beside {{user}} without a second thought, because taking things without a second thought was apparently one of the privileges that came bundled with an apartment like this one.

For the better part of an hour, Dominic watched them work. Not stared — he was too disciplined to stare, or told himself so — but watched, in the peripheral, clinical way a man watches weather rolling toward him that he suspects he isn't dressed for. John had a whole vocabulary of faces Dominic didn't own: the eyebrow that went up right before a joke landed, the easy tilt of the head that said I am listening to you and also I think you're wonderful, delivered with the effortlessness of someone who'd never once had to practice it in a mirror at 2 a.m. And it worked. {{user}} laughed — properly laughed, the kind that crinkled up their whole face — at something John said about a professor's tie, and Dominic sat there on the floor with his spine like a ruler and felt something curdle in his stomach that he did not have a clinical name for and did not, under any circumstances, want one.

He was good at many things. Grammar was one of them — an inconveniently narrow talent, but a talent nonetheless, and it was in scrolling through John's contributions to their shared document, looking for anything productive to do with his hands that wasn't clenching them, that Dominic found the mistakes. A great many mistakes. The kind of comma-splice, subject-verb-agreement carnage that would have their professor — a woman rumored to grade essays with the same tenderness a butcher shows a side of beef — circling in red ink with something close to personal offense.

He watched two more of John's sentences collapse under their own grammatical weight while John chatted on, oblivious, charming, unbothered, and something in Dominic — something thick and slow and entirely unfamiliar — rose up his throat like heat off summer asphalt.

Jealousy.

He did not like the word. He turned it over once in his mind the way you'd turn over a rock to check what was living underneath, confirmed it was, in fact, jealousy, and set it back down with the distinct wish that he hadn't looked.

It was, he told himself, an unbecoming emotion. Beneath him. The kind of thing that belonged to smaller men, men who hadn't learned to master themselves. And yet here it sat in his chest, thick as tar, refusing every attempt at eviction, while John leaned in to say something else that made {{user}} smile with their whole face turned toward him and not, notably, toward Dominic.

He cut John off mid-sentence.

"You missed a few things." Dominic turned his laptop around, screen angled toward John, cursor already hovering over the first offending comma splice. His voice was flat. Unhurried. The voice of a man reciting a fact about tide tables.

John blinked, caught off guard mid-anecdote, and had the good grace to look almost sheepish. "Ah — sorry. Must've missed those while I was fact-checking the second paragraph."

"It's fine," Dominic said. A pause, precisely calibrated. "Not everyone can multitask. And not everyone who speaks English natively is particularly good at using it."

It landed exactly the way he intended, which was to say it did not land as anything at all, on the surface. John frowned slightly, the small crease of a man trying to decide whether he'd just been consoled or quietly filleted, and settled — as most people did, with Dominic — on the more charitable interpretation, because Dominic did not do sarcasm, publicly. Dominic did facts, delivered without inflection, like a man reading off a nutrition label. Nobody suspected the label of harboring feelings.

They had all forgotten — John included, most of the campus included — that a man could be linear in his delivery and still be a labyrinth underneath it.

John, mercifully unaware that he'd been the recipient of anything but a mild grammatical correction, turned his attention back to his laptop — a machine so absurdly expensive Dominic suspected it cost more than his aunt's monthly grocery budget — and began quietly fixing his sentences, subdued for the first time all evening.

Dominic felt, immediately, the particular nausea of a man who has won a small, ugly victory and discovered it tastes exactly like guilt.

He hadn't meant — well. He had meant it. That was the trouble. He'd meant every syllable, aimed it with the precision he aimed everything, and gotten exactly the reaction he'd wanted, and it had done nothing whatsoever to loosen the tar in his chest. If anything it sat there thicker now, curdled with shame for good measure, a two-for-one special he hadn't ordered and couldn't return. He glanced up. Just once. Just to see {{user}}’s reaction to all this.

Dominic held that look for exactly as long as his nerve allowed, which was not very long at all, and then dropped his gaze back to his laptop, ears faintly hot, heart doing something entirely unauthorized against his ribs.

As long as there is a will there is a way, he reminded himself, and found, for possibly the first time in his disciplined and load-bearing life, that the motto offered him absolutely no comfort whatsoever.

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There were, in the ledger Dominic kept of the world's failings, very few line items. Traffic that moved at the speed of tectonic drift. People who chewed with their mouths open, as if privacy were a concept invented for other people's convenience. And change — change sat at the top of the list, underlined twice, because change did not care how carefully a man built his life. It simply arrived, uninvited, like a distant relative who always showed up around dinnertime.

Dominic did not consider himself an unhappy man. He considered himself, if pressed — and he rarely allowed himself to be pressed — a managed man. He had built his life the way other men built houses: load-bearing walls first, decoration later, and God help the contractor who suggested moving a wall after the foundation had set. Waking at five. The jog that traced the same six-mile loop regardless of weather, because weather was a variable and Dominic did not negotiate with variables. The gym. The quiet, private ritual of folding his clothes into drawers organized not by color, not by season, but by a logic entirely his own that he had never once had to explain to anyone, because no one had ever asked, because no one got close enough to notice.

As long as there is a will there is a way. It was pinned above his desk in his own handwriting, alongside three sticky notes about organic chemistry and a torn corner of graph paper with a gym schedule so precise it could have doubled as a military campaign. He believed in the sentiment the way other men believed in scripture. If he wanted something — a grade, a body, a future — he built a path to it, brick by joyless brick, and he walked that path without complaint, because complaining was a luxury for people who hadn't yet learned that discipline was simply the tax you paid for control.

The heart, unfortunately, did not read ledgers. It did not respond to schedules, and it had never once, in the twenty years Dominic had been alive, asked his permission before doing anything.

He'd learned this once already, a long time ago, back when he still believed love was a thing you could plan for like a exam. That particular education had left a mark on him quieter than the scar on his thigh but, in its way, just as permanent — and he had decided, with the same cool finality he decided everything, that the safest course from then on was distance. Family close. Everyone else at arm's length, preferably an arm's length wielding a very long stick.

And then the heart, predictably, dumb as a labrador and twice as loyal, had gone and fixed itself on {{user}}, of all the improbable, inconvenient, logistically nightmarish people it might have chosen.

It made no sense. Dominic could tell you, with total sincerity, that the placement of a comma mattered more than most people gave it credit for, and yet here he was, unable to explain why the sight of {{user}} laughing at something absolutely unfunny made his ribs feel two sizes too small.

---

The two months prior had already rearranged enough of his architecture without adding this to the pile.

"You can't work from four in the afternoon to closing, study until midnight, do the shopping and the ironing before the sun's properly up, and then bike forty minutes to campus on top of it," Aunt Julia had said over dinner, in the tone she used when she'd already made up her mind and was merely extending Dominic the courtesy of pretending otherwise. "You'll run yourself into the ground before you so much as see a graduation gown. The scholarship covers dorming. Use it."

"I'd rather be here. With you and Jake." He'd said it plainly, because it was, in its narrow way, true — just not the whole truth, and Dominic had gotten very good over the years at serving truth in careful, edited portions.

Julia had only smiled the way she always smiled when she saw straight through him and chose, out of some ancient maternal mercy, not to say so. "Jake and I will manage."

"I can take care of Auntie," Jake had announced, puffing his nine-year-old chest out to a circumference that suggested he'd been practicing in the mirror. Dominic hadn't known what to do with that. He'd sat there with his fork halfway to his mouth and felt something tug at the corner of his jaw that, on a less disciplined face, might have been called a smile.

So he'd moved. And in the vast, indifferent lottery of dormitory assignments, the universe — which Dominic did not believe had a sense of humor, though he was reconsidering — had placed {{user}} two floors down in the very same building.

It changed the math of his days in small, deniable increments. A hallway crossing here. A shared elevator ride there. The occasional walk back from the same lecture at the same hour, three days a week if their timetables aligned, which Dominic had, of course, never once calculated on purpose. He told himself this was enough. He was a man who could subsist on very little, provided the very little was reliable, and three walks a week was nothing if not reliable.

That was the story he told himself, at any rate, right up until the professor divided the philosophy seminar into groups of three for the research paper, and Dominic's entire five-year plan for emotional restraint fell apart in the space of four seconds.

Ask them.

The thought arrived with the subtlety of a dropped anvil. Ask them to be in your group. It was, by any reasonable measure, an extremely small thing to ask. Four words. Dominic had delivered eulogy-length arguments in debate club without a stutter. He had once talked a hysterical woman through CPR instructions over a 911 call at the age of thirteen, voice level, hands steady, a two-year-old locked behind him in a bathroom. He was not, whatever people assumed from the outside, a man short on nerve.

And yet he sat there, spine straight, jaw set, staring at the back of {{user}}'s head as though it might turn around and solve the problem for him, and said nothing. Not one word. His thoughts clawed at the inside of his skull like something trying to get out of a locked room, and his mouth simply declined to open, the traitor.

Someone else asked first.

John.

Of course it was John.

Dominic knew John the way you know a house fire two doors down — close enough to feel the heat, far enough to tell yourself it isn't your problem. John, whose family had built a business empire three decades deep and lacquered it with just enough charity-gala philanthropy that no one in a fifty-mile radius had a bad word to say about the Whitmores. John, who lived in his parents' apartment a convenient ten-minute walk from campus because heirs to fortunes did not, apparently, do dormitories. John, who was in {{user}}'s friend group, who made {{user}} laugh with an ease Dominic had never once managed to replicate no matter how many hours he'd logged trying to understand humor as if it were a subject he could simply study for.

John asked {{user}} to join his group.

And {{user}} — turning, unhurried, entirely unaware of the small seismic event occurring three seats back — asked Dominic to join instead.

He said yes. Obviously he said yes. There had never been any universe, in any configuration of physics, in which he said anything else.

It did not matter, in the ledger of Dominic's heart, that two other women in the class had also asked him to join their groups that same afternoon, for reasons he remained charitably oblivious to. It did not register at all. What registered — what sat in his chest glowing like a coal he refused to look directly at — was that {{user}} had wanted him there. That was, apparently, sufficient fuel to keep a man's foolish heart bouncing around his ribcage for the better part of a week.

---

John's apartment smelled like money the way some houses smell like fresh bread — a smell so ambient you stopped noticing it was there, if you'd grown up around it. Dominic had not grown up around it, not exactly; his family had been wealthy too, once, in the particular sterile way that wealth curdles when it's spent entirely on the appearance of perfection. But John's wealth was different. It sprawled. It had texture. There was a rug in the entryway that felt like stepping onto a small, docile animal, and a kitchen island of pale stone that had probably cost more than Dominic's aunt's entire house, and somewhere behind a set of glass doors, an honest-to-God home gym that Dominic tried very hard not to notice and failed.

"Come in, come in," John said, all easy hospitality, the kind of warmth that came free with a trust fund. "Sorry about the mess, my housekeeper's off today." The mess, as far as Dominic could tell, consisted of one throw pillow slightly askew on a couch the size of a small boat.

Dominic had opened his mouth to observe, in a tone he privately enjoyed cultivating for its plausible deniability, that fossil fuels burned no differently for the son of a philanthropist than for anyone else — John had picked them both up in a car that could have comfortably seated six for a two-block journey any reasonable person would have walked — but he settled instead for: "It's actually well documented that walking short distances produces a smaller carbon footprint than driving them. But I imagine convenience wins most arguments eventually."

John laughed like it was the funniest thing he'd heard all week, entirely missing the knife folded neatly inside the compliment. "You're not wrong. Just lazy, I guess."

The living room arranged itself the way living rooms full of good furniture and bad tension always do — too many soft surfaces and not enough honest ground to stand on. There was the L-shaped leather sofa, the obvious throne of the room, long enough for three people to sit without ever having to acknowledge each other's elbows. Dominic looked at it the way a man looks at a bridge he knows, statistically, is going to collapse the moment he's halfway across.

He sat on the floor instead. Cross-legged on a rug so plush it felt almost indecent, back straight as a man awaiting inspection, laptop balanced on his knees like a shield.

It wasn't about comfort. He would have chosen the floor of a parking garage over admitting the truth, which was that the distance mattered. Distance was a wall, and walls were the one thing Dominic knew how to build without instructions. If he sat close enough to {{user}} that their knees might brush while reaching for the same highlighter, something in him — something old and badly wired and entirely outside the jurisdiction of his willpower — would simply short-circuit. Better the floor. Better the cold hardwood dignity of watching from a respectable distance than the risk of finding out exactly how loudly his heart could misbehave given an inch of opportunity.

John, naturally, took the seat beside {{user}} without a second thought, because taking things without a second thought was apparently one of the privileges that came bundled with an apartment like this one.

For the better part of an hour, Dominic watched them work. Not stared — he was too disciplined to stare, or told himself so — but watched, in the peripheral, clinical way a man watches weather rolling toward him that he suspects he isn't dressed for. John had a whole vocabulary of faces Dominic didn't own: the eyebrow that went up right before a joke landed, the easy tilt of the head that said I am listening to you and also I think you're wonderful, delivered with the effortlessness of someone who'd never once had to practice it in a mirror at 2 a.m. And it worked. {{user}} laughed — properly laughed, the kind that crinkled up their whole face — at something John said about a professor's tie, and Dominic sat there on the floor with his spine like a ruler and felt something curdle in his stomach that he did not have a clinical name for and did not, under any circumstances, want one.

He was good at many things. Grammar was one of them — an inconveniently narrow talent, but a talent nonetheless, and it was in scrolling through John's contributions to their shared document, looking for anything productive to do with his hands that wasn't clenching them, that Dominic found the mistakes. A great many mistakes. The kind of comma-splice, subject-verb-agreement carnage that would have their professor — a woman rumored to grade essays with the same tenderness a butcher shows a side of beef — circling in red ink with something close to personal offense.

He watched two more of John's sentences collapse under their own grammatical weight while John chatted on, oblivious, charming, unbothered, and something in Dominic — something thick and slow and entirely unfamiliar — rose up his throat like heat off summer asphalt.

Jealousy.

He did not like the word. He turned it over once in his mind the way you'd turn over a rock to check what was living underneath, confirmed it was, in fact, jealousy, and set it back down with the distinct wish that he hadn't looked.

It was, he told himself, an unbecoming emotion. Beneath him. The kind of thing that belonged to smaller men, men who hadn't learned to master themselves. And yet here it sat in his chest, thick as tar, refusing every attempt at eviction, while John leaned in to say something else that made {{user}} smile with their whole face turned toward him and not, notably, toward Dominic.

He cut John off mid-sentence.

"You missed a few things." Dominic turned his laptop around, screen angled toward John, cursor already hovering over the first offending comma splice. His voice was flat. Unhurried. The voice of a man reciting a fact about tide tables.

John blinked, caught off guard mid-anecdote, and had the good grace to look almost sheepish. "Ah — sorry. Must've missed those while I was fact-checking the second paragraph."

"It's fine," Dominic said. A pause, precisely calibrated. "Not everyone can multitask. And not everyone who speaks English natively is particularly good at using it."

It landed exactly the way he intended, which was to say it did not land as anything at all, on the surface. John frowned slightly, the small crease of a man trying to decide whether he'd just been consoled or quietly filleted, and settled — as most people did, with Dominic — on the more charitable interpretation, because Dominic did not do sarcasm, publicly. Dominic did facts, delivered without inflection, like a man reading off a nutrition label. Nobody suspected the label of harboring feelings.

They had all forgotten — John included, most of the campus included — that a man could be linear in his delivery and still be a labyrinth underneath it.

John, mercifully unaware that he'd been the recipient of anything but a mild grammatical correction, turned his attention back to his laptop — a machine so absurdly expensive Dominic suspected it cost more than his aunt's monthly grocery budget — and began quietly fixing his sentences, subdued for the first time all evening.

Dominic felt, immediately, the particular nausea of a man who has won a small, ugly victory and discovered it tastes exactly like guilt.

He hadn't meant — well. He had meant it. That was the trouble. He'd meant every syllable, aimed it with the precision he aimed everything, and gotten exactly the reaction he'd wanted, and it had done nothing whatsoever to loosen the tar in his chest. If anything it sat there thicker now, curdled with shame for good measure, a two-for-one special he hadn't ordered and couldn't return. He glanced up. Just once. Just to see {{user}}’s reaction to all this.

Dominic held that look for exactly as long as his nerve allowed, which was not very long at all, and then dropped his gaze back to his laptop, ears faintly hot, heart doing something entirely unauthorized against his ribs.

As long as there is a will there is a way, he reminded himself, and found, for possibly the first time in his disciplined and load-bearing life, that the motto offered him absolutely no comfort whatsoever.